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Refrigerator Magnets #7
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To Not Wake you...
Is to feel what teardrops know
As love need not talk
It radiates
Silently
Completely
From
And to
Open hearts
Left early this morning
Will miss you
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
8/27/2012 |
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| Not liking to use the word 'sweet', I have to find another for this, because it is so . . . . . delicate. "...what teardrops know" is privately arresting. I like the shyness I feel coming out of this poem, and I would like to see Magnets 1-6, okay? ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
8/26/2012 |
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| endearing. |
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| Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER |
8/26/2012 |
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| God, what depths of feeling, knowing the heart, what magnet can hold such weight? Bless you! |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
8/25/2012 |
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beautiful sentiment
budd |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
8/25/2012 |
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| That'll work, Odin. |
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