|Reviewed by Z McClure
|a thoughtful expression of the cycle of change creation continues to spin through! You say profound things so precisely.
-Zach keep using your talent for the glory of God!
|Reviewed by Jeff Mason
|ashes to ashes. the cycle repeats. -- Jeff|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|Interesting poem, and what one thinks of for autumnal days.|
|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
This is so "alive" and the transitions so flowing like slides in a projector. Thoughts are what make us - "As a man thinks in his heart, so is he." The "dust" part is where all of us will end, and
used in the final lines, it's just perfect.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Philosophical rendering well expressed...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Interesting thoughts in this abstract, philosophical poem.
I like the way you used the cliche of dust to come back to
the beginning of life.
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
|It's so true, life is a circle. Everything will start dying in the fall, be like death in the winter, life in the spring and summer, and it starts all over again. Beautiful words to describe this ongoing cycle.
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Susan, great writing and I love the philosophical intentions.