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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/1/2003 |
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Very nicely-done and creative imagery.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o) |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
10/31/2003 |
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Most interesting so!!
Thought provoking write!! |
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| Reviewed by Jim Beam (Reader) |
10/31/2003 |
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| Your sick.... Wait till I get you! |
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| Reviewed by Patricia Gomes |
10/26/2003 |
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Excellent, excellent, excellent! Particularly the blending of the title into the body of the poem. Have read your last few, just haven't had much time to comment. Wicked busy lately - too many projects.
Listen - dropping Ling's ess down a line is as artistic as it is poetic. You, sir, are brilliant . . . but don't let that swell your ego. <wink> |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/24/2003 |
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| wild write! |
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