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Black Silk and Lace
by Kathleen L. McDonald
Monday, August 18, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.
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A challenge write to write a poem as the opposite sex. It had to be about love and or dating. This is my challenge write.


Black Silk and Lace
By Kathy Lynn


My eye catches her as she walks through the door,

A Goddess in a short dress of black silk and lace

I smile to myself as she is shown to a table

Long dark hair and a beautiful face


She scans the room and our eyes meet and hold

Her smile makes my heart miss a beat

The sax that I am playing slips out of my hand

As I watch her slide into that cushioned seat


Her eyes never leave mine as she slowly crosses her legs

Long and beautiful they make my hands damp and shake

Slowly she puts her hair behind her ear

My mouth turns to cotton and my heart starts to ache


With her fingers she traces her face to her chin

Over her red lips and back again

Her eyes full of secrets met my gaze

Through out this place's smoky haze


Moistening her lips, trailing a finger up the center

Of the low bodice, slinky black dress

To the base of her throat

And back again


My blood was swimming my mouth agape

Surly the way she ran her hand

From calf to knee and to thigh

Was meant to catch a mans eye


I followed each movement of hers while

My pulse leaped like a wolf on the prowl

I opened my mouth and stifled

A low growl


She sat through the song leaning back in her chair

One arm provocatively hooked over the back

When the song was over she traced her tongue

Over those red, red lips, I almost lost my breath


She rose, her gaze still locked on mine

Black silk and lace my hands wanted to feel

Running a hand down her hip she smiled

Turning around on those man-killer heels


She was to be my blind date for the night

I closed up my sax and left the band stand

Thanking the Gods for my best friend





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Reviewed by George Carroll 8/19/2009
Steamy write and from a woman looking through a man's eye's and lust.
Reviewed by Dark Knight 8/17/2009
wow...I feel like I was in that room watching the whole thing as well-very hot poem
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 11/15/2008
Very visual Kat, clear and striking images come alive! This was like watching a movie scene unfold. Well done and very sensual! Hugs, Elizabeth
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/19/2008
A sweetly seductive write, Kathleen. Thank you for sharing this perspective. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Southern Comfort 8/21/2008
Welcome to AD! Writing from a man's point of view, must have been freeing! This was an awesome write from a talented writer! SC
Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 8/20/2008
Love the depth you have gone! Wish I could have seen the pictures...Ahhhh...SAX - my favorite of them all!
I can relate to this very strongly, your imageries are stunning!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Soulful SHEExooo

STay Positive! and Kath - WELCOME - to this fan-tab-U-lous Den, where us queens and kings of the pen, can write till the sun gleams! lol
I write all genres - hope you come by and stay awhile -
I started TRAcking your heart since you deeply touched mine! Thank you SWEET FEE, for sending Kath to US!
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 8/19/2008
Very sexy write. Too bad authorsden cannot display the pictures inside a poem, otherwise this would have been more interesting.

Sandie Angel :o)
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 8/19/2008
Absolutely wonderful as you can write from a man's view with a womans heart, now I will have to try that down the road. A great write that you share with us and thank you for joining us here at the den. I will thank my Cousin Felix for getting you to join us.

Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Beryl McMullen 8/19/2008
Seduction at its best
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/19/2008
I love this one as you manage to look at a women through the eyes of a woman and appreciate the beauty and sweet sensuality of her without being gender bias. A good writer has this ability and I am glad I introduced you to den.

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