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| Reviewed by Shawn Stroud |
8/6/2007 |
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| A powerful write, I really enjoyed this read. The last two lines are stunning, and made me want to read the poem all over again. Very nice work here! |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
4/15/2007 |
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A powrefull offering.....bullseye of a write...right??
Love Tinka :) |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/14/2007 |
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Bill,
Spot on perfection: we don't know America, do we? A dark current of hatred flows down bloodied streets of discrimination against any who are considered "different": gays, lesbians, disabled, minority...well done. I will be reading more of your words.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
4/14/2007 |
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I once looked Acirema up and never knew that this place actually existed and you'd be surprised who owns land there...
As for the write~ you penned a thought provoking piece that stirs ones other view on how hurtful people can actually be...and for what? So they themselves can be self-fullfilled?
Enjoyed this and the thoughts that linger...
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/14/2007 |
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| Very powerful indeed |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
4/14/2007 |
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| Quite a powerful write. |
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