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· Sound of Silence

· The Epiphany

· Get A Life People!

· Today

· Sin of We (Original)

· Callous Heart

· Sin of We II

· Men are Stupid, Women are Crazy

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  Not with a Bang - but a Whimper
by Ms Beeds
Wednesday, September 03, 2008
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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Recent poems by Ms Beeds
•  If Love's Hindsight Were Foresight
•  My One and Forever Only
•  Men are Stupid, Women are Crazy
•  Sound of Silence
•  The Epiphany
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And so the saga ends...will I ever learn?!


 

Not with a Bang – but a Whimper
 
And so the saga ends -
Not with a bang – but a whimper.
After extensive cat and mouse play,
Death by duck bites would've been simpler.
 
Be I punisher or punished?
Was once an open query.
Who knew the obvious answer,
Is I am an idiot - quite clearly?!
 
If “You should not trust me”,
Is the provided directive -
Future note to self -
My freaking judgement’s defective!
 
What the hell was I thinking?! -
Lobbing my heart in the air?
When you emphatically stated,
You were unable to care.
 
It‘s said hope springs eternal -
Beyond a doubt now proven true .
Why else did I consider-
The possibility of me and you?
 
What most depresses,
Now that I reflect -
Is the question of when and where,
I abandoned self respect?
 
Despite the emotional angst,
I’m now plowing through -
I remain the village idiot,
Still desirous of me with you.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/4/2008
Perhaps it is time for some drastic change. Look to the future, plan and smile....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by S Phillips 9/4/2008
Now you make yourself the center of attention. Make your world revolve around YOU for the moment. New slate, fresh outlook, new goals, direction and pleasure. Put on new glasses when you look in the mirror to see a new you. Get busy. Have fun. Dance. Then write new songs from within.

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