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  Alone in Our Togetherness
by Ms Beeds
Sunday, February 08, 2009
Rated "PG" by the Author.

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How two people may exist within their own moment and deny reality


Inspired by Denise Edward's "This World of Ours".  I loved her write but did not share her sentiment.  Her poem was the basis for the below - A modified plagarism to which I admit - I just wanted to try out the style - and Denise - the content was very effective.  Apologies for not a complete original but Denise's poem was very inspirational. 

 
Alone in Our Togetherness

 Alone in our togetherness 

Words are insufficient to describe

These feelings 

Of wanting and needing

Pursuit of illicit passion

Kiss me before I starve

Love me before we are judged

Your eyes ensnare 

You hands negate my invisibility

Passion ignites without regard

I share with you the taste of laughter

You are desire within my night

You bring me completeness

I’m tranquil within your embrace

The power of some over none

Alone in our togetherness

In this world of ours no one else sees

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Felix Perry 7/3/2009
Hmnn as an oldie from the den this write touched me for I have seen and felt this type of alone together often here on the internet. Some may say it is wrong but this life is short and love is fleeting but our hearts do truly have minds of their own...

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Reviewed by Carin Spirit 2/9/2009
Ms Beeds ~ Sounding more positive here, I am glad you are feeling better, and it sounds as if you are much better. Warmth and Love to you and yours, Carin'

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