|Reviewed by Lakeshia
|I love your poem.....sorry that it took me so long to view it....but keep writhing.|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|Very well done...sensual, lusty but with a bit of sad darkness also.|
|Reviewed by jermerico lee (Reader)
|ummm what can i say.....this is so deep so deep|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
|Beautifully flowing and sensual. Well done.
"...To distract you [form] the black [not] in my heart..."
I think you mean [knot]. Your spell check wouldn't have picked up either. We read what we [think] we wrote.
For some hints on writing, check out my articles if you have time, and the free download booklet [under books] on Marketing and Promoting Yourself. Some helpful hints I've put together.