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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
12/18/2005 |
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I don't know how I missed these beautiful words and music. Having visited my brother in Phoenix I know how magical a desert morning can be.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Lynn Barry |
12/18/2005 |
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| That feral cat has you for a blessing. Wonderful words...that touched me deeply. Thanks! |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
12/17/2005 |
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I understand too Sherry that life is a blessing and I should be thankful that I can at least enjoy the beauty of the day, even when it snows. But there are those times that I feel that what's the use. Everytime I turn around someone in my "family" is cursing my birth. This is such a beautifully painted landscape, and should be in Louvre for all to enjoy, that is how I see the majestic purple mountains, the geese and the clouds, the sun rising, and your kitty "Magic" having his breakfast. This could be considered a story poem, or a free verse. But whatever we call it, it is beautiful. Thnx for sharing sis. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn and determined to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your still very sad and terrified little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be." |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
12/15/2005 |
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| great reflect Sherry,your words speak loud, loving and strong |
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| Reviewed by Sharmagne Leland-St. John(quillandparchment.com) (Reader) |
12/15/2005 |
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Wonderful! Certainly could be classified as a poem! Great presentation as well.. Wonder though if in future writing you could get away from the cliché.. Such as "V-shaped patterns" Might better have been described as:
A chevron of geese or a wedge of geese..
Keep up the journaling! |
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| Reviewed by The Smoking Poet |
12/14/2005 |
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Indeed a blessing, from a cat's soft ear to a grand mountain, and should every day so fill us with gratitude.
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
12/14/2005 |
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I'll add the "Amen."
blessin's Sis Sherry,
cynth'ya |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
12/13/2005 |
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B e a u t i f u l. Cat adds just the right touch. Makes the images that you paint so well all the more real. W O W and W O W again!!
Blesssings, Pea ;)
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
12/12/2005 |
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Absolutely beautifully written
Love & Peace
Happy Holidays
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
12/11/2005 |
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Oh yes Sherry...I think it is a poem,it touched me,thank you for sharing it.
Best wishes always to you and yours
from
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| Reviewed by Safi Abdi |
12/6/2005 |
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<Surrounded by more than I understand or could have ever hoped for>
I think this line says it all, Sherry. Beautiful thoughts expressed in this poem! May Allah guide us all to His perfect path!
Thank you!
Safi
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
12/4/2005 |
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Yes indeed, all is hushed and silent before the majesty of Almighty God
Breathtaking poem of epic proportions Sherry !
And I love that picture
Peter |
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| Reviewed by Nordette Adams |
11/29/2005 |
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| Yes, all life is a blessing. Wonderful poem, Sherry. We should learn to take joy in the little things. :-) ~~Nordette |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
11/27/2005 |
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| Not really a poem?? Are you KIDDING me?? This is absolutely the purist form of poetry I know, flowing straight from the heart and mind that conceived it and unadulterated onto the page in it's purest essence. And what a picture you give us! Thanksgiving indeed - and what to be thankful for! Love the acknowledgement that the moment has been created for you and you alone... that really moves me too, when I am blessed enough to encounter such times - few and far between in my experience as I don't tend to roam outdoors in solitude too early or too late... much to my chagrin; I really should make time for it - must put the rest of life into a different perspective. These are times of truly feeling a deep oneness with creation that reaches right into the core of our being and centres us, too. Marvellous work, Sherry. Thank you. LOL Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by ~ Chanti |
11/27/2005 |
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Dear Sherry,
Thanks for sharing this. It allowed me such an insight into your way of life. You are fortunate and even more so to know it. The said that this is not poetry but to me it is. Every beautiful expression.
I hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving.
love Chanti |
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| Reviewed by Miller Caldwell |
11/27/2005 |
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Oh Sherry
Yes YOU ARE a POET. Have no doubts.
You reflect your environment though love of life. Nature provides your nourishment. More please......
Best wishes
Miller |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
11/26/2005 |
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| This is absolutely beautiful~ |
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| Reviewed by Dan Rains |
11/25/2005 |
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Beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.
Dan |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
11/25/2005 |
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This is wonderfully uplifting, Sherry. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you.
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
11/25/2005 |
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| A truly beautiful Thanksgiving Moment Ode, Sherry - especially liked the very last stanza, and the accompanying music. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
11/25/2005 |
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| Thank you for this one. Enjoyed each and every well penned word, and the whole is a classic. Am saving a copy to remind me during those other 364 days. A Great Holiday Season to you. - Bill |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
11/25/2005 |
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| All of life is a blessing and we should express our thanks and gratitude to God in prayers and in poems. Well done Sherry. This is top of thanksgiving day poems. |
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| Reviewed by Suzy Karnow (Reader) |
11/24/2005 |
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Wonderful!
Blessings to you,
Suzy |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
11/24/2005 |
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| so majestic... a gracious gift I accept with thanks on this Thanksgiving Day. many, many blessings to you. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
11/24/2005 |
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beauty flows from your pen and envelops the wisdom of your soul ...
you capture the moment of thanksgiving, allowing it to swell within our hearts ... wonderful poem! |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
11/24/2005 |
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Sherry, This is absolutely breathtaking. It just brings chills and tears swelling in my eyes. It's beautiful and speaks clearly from Beautiful you and your beautiful heart and soul.
Happy Thanksgiving Sherry,
Tracey and Gang. xoox(c :) |
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| Reviewed by Sandie Angel |
11/24/2005 |
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Hi Sherry:
This is so well-written. Beautiful and inspiring!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
11/24/2005 |
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Yes, Life truly is a blessing.
We should all take time for these
reflective moments and give thanks
every day.
Love & Light,
Joseph |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
11/24/2005 |
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Most beautiful Sherry!!
Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
11/24/2005 |
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Beautiful, Sherry, simply beautiful.
felix |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
11/24/2005 |
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| You have created a marvelous moving poem on how precious each life is and it should never be taken for granted. Many blessings to you on this Happy Thanksgiving day. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
11/24/2005 |
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Sherry, I'm awestruck by the beauty this magnificent poem has flooded my being with! Your spirit is a beneficent gift to us all! I also love the music and felt like that deer panting, until I read this! THANK you for sharing your beautiful, heart mind and soul!
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Debashish Haar |
11/24/2005 |
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Imagery is fluid and beautiful...An inspiring poem.
D |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
11/24/2005 |
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| Yes you have alot to be thankful for...beautiful sentiment & picture...good to see you posting, Ed |
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