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| Reviewed by steve Chering |
11/1/2009 |
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Such a write. wow factor;
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
8/23/2009 |
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I have been asking myself these same questions over and over since I was 12. I have yet to find an answer, especially to the last one. This is a very thought provoking poem sis, that really makes us look deep into ourselves. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and who love you, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie. |
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| Reviewed by Matthew Wright |
8/21/2009 |
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| I ask myself these things all the time. Very nicely done. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
8/16/2009 |
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| You are all that you can be and as you step out of the darkness your new awareness will show you the beauty that you are. Wonderful to read you again! |
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| Reviewed by A PAX |
7/26/2009 |
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| ahhh....love this.........and I just bet your gottado list is one of of things you choose.....well mostly.....this write is very relateable to us all.......and so very Sherriy! applause......anita |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
7/25/2009 |
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You GO, girl !! [Thanks to you, be easier to keep aGOin', moi'ssef.}
Balmy Skies and Roses, <3 'Pea' <3 |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/21/2009 |
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Awesome write, Sherry!!!! I enjoyed every single line; loved the lyrical flow; read it a couple of times for sheer enjoyment.
Anna |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
7/14/2009 |
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Outstanding write Sherry
Most enjoyable read
Love & peace be with you
William |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/13/2009 |
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Sherry,
Nice seeing you again, I've missed you! An excellent write of choice - or destiny. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/13/2009 |
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| i enjoyed this--thought provoking and different! |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
7/13/2009 |
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| A most thought provoking piece, Sherry. I like that graphic, too. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/12/2009 |
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Sherry,
You are a conqueror of your own weaknesses and doubts and express the moment of triumph eloquently and in beautufully constructed stanzas. Kudos!
John |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
7/12/2009 |
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| This is a dynamic write. In the water and afraid to fish... an excellent image. Enjoyed. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/12/2009 |
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| My kind of write, wish I thought of it but each of our destinies transcend each others or so we would like to think...hope that makes sense, not even sure it does to me...Ed & |
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| Reviewed by Emile Tubiana |
7/12/2009 |
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| Dear Sherry Gail, It is nice seeing you again after months. Your poem is great and the rhymes are perfect. We all reach crossroads which make us think. Our entire life is a question of choice, if we don't know the answer, my suggestion would be "do not move now, wait until the morning which wile bring a fresh answer". Love to you and yours, Emile |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/12/2009 |
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Thank you for sharing your thought-inciting perspective, Sherry. It leaves me reading your verses again... ...and thinking. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
7/12/2009 |
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A beautifully written piece Sherry! Has a unique quality ,different than your usual style...you capture the theme with fine points!Fear is something we don't like, yet it can be our best friend,when it comes to warning us of danger...Enhoyed this...
Love,
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary |
7/12/2009 |
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| I can see why you'd have to develop a couple of greaat lines like that. Well done! Love that photo, too. It sets the scene very well. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/12/2009 |
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...WHEN PROBLEMS LEAVE ME SCREAMING
LORD WHAT SHALL I DO??!!
JESUS HOLD ME CLOSE
AND HE WHISPERS...I LOVE YOU
THERE COMES A TIME, HOPEFULLY, WHEN WE REALIZE OUR LIVES ARE NOT IN OUR HANDS....BUT HIS. THIS IS A WELL WRITTEN POEM WITH GREAT PHRASES, RHYME AND IMAGERY. THANKS FOR THE SHARE AND GOD BLESS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/12/2009 |
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I believe we all from time to time have to sit down alone and take stock of our lives and our destinies. Perhaps we cannot pick the eventual destiny that we will arrive at but possibly we can help plan the trip so we will enjoy it the most.
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/12/2009 |
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Time to go sky diving. Seriously, we all should start anew from time to time. Or at least reexamine why we are doing what we are doing. Good point worth relating.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) |
7/12/2009 |
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Hi Sherry, I've been asking myself the same question(s) lately. At a turning point, but don't know which way to turn. I know what I want to do, but..... thank you for sharing this, Sherry... an introspective write, indeed.
In Spirit,
Bear |
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| Reviewed by Lew Duffey |
7/12/2009 |
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Is it? All of life is a question.
This write says it well.
God bless,
Lew |
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| Reviewed by Ron Karcz |
7/12/2009 |
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Great job Sherry. By the way, it's never too late to take that great leap of faith into the vast unknown.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
7/12/2009 |
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| Excellent writing is right sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugss |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/11/2009 |
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once we overcome our fear of taking an unfamiliar path, or an unknown direction along freeway of our pursuits and desires, we fulfill the full potential of who we are and what we will become ...
excellent poem, Sherry ... the rhyme is superb ... |
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