|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|Very emotional poem. And one people can relate to.
I read the last two lines and noticed that the last line is in the past tense while the one before it is in the present tense. I'm tempted to change the last line to present tense. Otherwise it sounds off.
Thanks for sharing and keep on writing.
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is great.You express yourself very well in this piece.take care|
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
The poem is beautiful, and I'm still anticipating your new book! The hurt and anger show through so well. Fantastic write.
|Reviewed by Linda Torrence (Reader)
|Excellent, Terry, as usual. I can't wait to read this book and this poetic chapter header, makes me want to "dive" into it right away. The header just sort of teases you as to what is inside!