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Lara Croft

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Don't
by Lara Croft

Thursday, July 04, 2002

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Don't notice me
Sitting here
I'm not really worth
Your bother
Like dog shit scraped off
The bottom of your shoe
You sneer, just enough
To let me know
You're feeling
Just a little distaste
But hey, don't worry
I'll wash off, I always do
And be forgotten
I'm really not worth
Your fucking attention, anyway
So please, please
Just move along and wipe
That look of disgust off your face
Before I wipe it off for you
Too many of you
Pretend not to see me
Or pretend that I'm okay
I'm just fine
As you sidle away from me
Not wanting "it" to rub off
Afraid it might be contagious
You're so full of shit
As you daintily side-step my aura
Believe me, I prefer it
If you don't notice me at all
Just don't.

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Reviewed by James David Compton (Reader) 1/23/2003
Too bad, you've been noticed.
I tend to find myself drawn to shoe-scrapings.
-James
Reviewed by Miranda Prather (Reader) 7/15/2002
nice use of words here to tell the story, but more importantly your use and then subsequent dis-use of punctuation helps to create the strung out, rambling rampage of the speaker
Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader) 7/5/2002
Uh-oh! The guy's in trouble.. ;)
Reviewed by Alexander Shaumyan (Reader) 7/4/2002
This kicks ass, Lara. Loved it.
Reviewed by Reilly 7/4/2002
U remind me of someone I know quite well, Aggresive piece
Reviewed by Janet Caldwell 7/4/2002
You're info on the Bio page is kick-ass. Love it. I don't go for rainbows either. ;) This is an excellent piece of poetry (art). Thank you so much for visiting my demented Den. lol

Blessings, Janet xoxoxoxo
Reviewed by Lori Moore 7/4/2002
Great expression. I would not want to be noticed by this guy either.
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