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Sex Or... ?
by Lara Croft

Wednesday, July 17, 2002

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(Sex)
There is no other word
Quite so capable
Of inducing daydreams
Completely unconcerned
About whether the time and place
Is appropriate
(Sex)
Okay
Admittedly, It doesn't quite have
The same effect, the same appeal
As the word "fuck"
But then
As I've already pointed out
There really is no way to compare
The word "fuck" stands alone
An icon of expressiveness
Whereas "sex"
Is more of a sensory stimulation
Conjuring up memories or fantasies of feelings
Of smells and sights
And the SOUNDS!!
Yes, the sounds
Nothing sexier than your partner
Moaning as he loses his mind
On top of you
Beneath you
Behind you... inside of you...
Well, you get the idea
(Sex)
A naughty word
Just a little bit bad
But not offensive to people
In the same way "fuck" is
And maybe "sex" isn't as versatile
But in my opinion
The visuals I see whenver I hear that word
More than make up for it.

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Reviewed by Rhonda Baumgardner 10/17/2002
You do a good job of showing the feeling instead of just telling it. I personally don't use that word, for anything, but that is why we all have our own choice of style, right?
Reviewed by Miranda Prather (Reader) 7/22/2002
Ah the freshly fucked look. good job of showing the feel rather than just recounting it. I could have used more of the repetition of the word that is the thought behind the poem. just as i was feeling the rhythmn of the pattern, it went too long.
Reviewed by Josephine Bohen 7/17/2002
naughty or not, i like it all.
nice musings
josie
Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader) 7/17/2002
my favorite is "afterglow"

it requires sex/fuck plus enough tender
to sooth the heart ends too

enjoyed the poem ms
Reviewed by Sandie Angel 7/17/2002
"Sex" is not a naughty word,
It is beautiful.

"fuck" is a naughty word.

Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$

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