|Reviewed by Rhonda Baumgardner
|You do a good job of showing the feeling instead of just telling it. I personally don't use that word, for anything, but that is why we all have our own choice of style, right?|
|Reviewed by Miranda Prather (Reader)
|Ah the freshly fucked look. good job of showing the feel rather than just recounting it. I could have used more of the repetition of the word that is the thought behind the poem. just as i was feeling the rhythmn of the pattern, it went too long.|
|Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
|naughty or not, i like it all.
|Reviewed by Dark Stranger (Reader)
|my favorite is "afterglow"
it requires sex/fuck plus enough tender
to sooth the heart ends too
enjoyed the poem ms
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|"Sex" is not a naughty word,
It is beautiful.
"fuck" is a naughty word.
Sandie Angel :o) / May Lu $*_*$