|Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
|Name's coming off painted desert walls...submitted...awake...
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Just lulls you to
This is perfection!
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Wonderful Haiku. Loved the last line|
|Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
|ooh great surprise in that last line, perfect juxstaposition! Dawn|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|you are extrememly good at writing kaiku ... the image this one creates is vivid and utilizes the true essence of haiku which is predominated by nature ...|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
|Wonderful images, I like this.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Really like this one, Carolyn.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Beautiful as always.|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|I love it!;-) Carolyn,you have a great imagination,
thanks for sharing it !
|Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
|I think Georgia O'Keeffe would smile upon this.|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|I hope the sidewinder remains asleep and set aside.|