|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Need to go next week
Prescriptions require renewal
Turkeys are gobbling
|Reviewed by jude forese
|you really capture the quintessence of the waiting room in this poem ....|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
I've been in-n-out of doctor's clinic most of my time...hurts...
keep well, stay safe
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|...atishoo... achoo... it's you!! Makes me feverish just to contemplate your words. A deft capture. xx|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Puts me right there in that waiting room....wondering.....well done!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|So clever...you capture the moment psychologically, and make it easy to identify!
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|It sadly seems there's always something next, on life's long and winding road.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Carolyn, A poem every single person can relate to...
Waiting for the doctor.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
now that says it wonderfully,
that miserable wait, almost
a sense of being trapped..for me,
the most dreaded words in any office
or govt establishment are 'take a seat'
i just know sentence has been passed
and i'm about to serve time.
Good one, Carolyn.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|My doctors waiting room matches this. A lot of folks have the flu. A very fine write.
GOD BLESS YOU