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Divorce Preceeding
by Julianza (Julie) Kim Shavin
Tuesday, August 03, 2010
Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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A symptom of diabetes is uncontrollable thirst.

Divorce Preceeding*

Diabetic, dying,
the blind dog lies

head arched back and around
the base of an overfull bowl

war steps over her - backforth, backforth,
the mouths of minutes like

bedbugs bagging a body
thunderclaps everywhere

her snout and feet twitch
our dreams are all of running

the terrific, wonderful
terrific, awful, thirst,

water never enough
is there

*sic

 

Julianza Shavin 2010

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviewed by jude forese 8/7/2010
interesting how this can be read from bottom up ...
Reviewed by J'nia Fowler 8/4/2010
Poor doggy. A tad confused but worthy of a second or third read. J'nia
Reviewed by George Carroll 8/3/2010
Sounds like two poems in one. Pure emotion
Reviewed by Felix Perry 8/3/2010
I was a little confused on this one too Julie, I wonder if you substiituted rabies for diabetes will it work a little better...just a small suggestion.
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Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe 8/3/2010
This is fascinating. Well done.
Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader) 8/3/2010
This is very moving Julie. Damn, where you been girl?? Tremendous writing. This strikes a chord with me too, as you know about the animal thing. I like this style. A lot!!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/3/2010
I cannot say that I understand this one but I do appreciate the effect of alliteration and I can sense powerful emotion/s. Love and peace,

Regis



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