by Kacie Rahm
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Rating due to the talk of death that I just realized thirteen year olds shouldn't have to deal with.
The pic is of me, Erin, and
Patricia Allison Haerling
(sept. 7, 1990 - jan. 29, 2005)
A radiant glow surrounded her face.
A smile was permanently plastered.
She did everything for the love of life.
Her laugh was infectious,
Her smile was gorgeous.
She was a star athlete,
Already scouted in the eighth grade.
All the boys were scouting her too.
Everybody loved her,
With a passion too large for words.
The fire burning in her eyes dimmed,
It now eats away at our souls.
My beautiful Tricia.
I don't understand why God does this,
An entire city grieves.
Why one foggy day
Had to get in her way.
I love you Tricia,
We all do, and I miss you so much.
I hope heaven's perfect,
Everything it's supposed to be,
You deserve nothing less.
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|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
Bountiful and profound. "Beautiful Tricia" is gratitude and friendship in fraternity.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Such a sad and heartfelt tribute. I am sorry to be late on commenting but I just accidentally came upon this. My deepest sympathy, Kaci Riann. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis|
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Wonderful expression. I am sorry for the loss.|
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|very beautiful picture (of you all)
so sorry for your lost
you have got to believe that her spirit is still her
and that you will meet again
you are doing a wonderful job in keeping her beautiful spirit alive
take care dear heart!!!
|Reviewed by Sarah Mathews
|well put kaci...tricia was such a humongous loss...i'm gonna save this poem if thats ok with you...i need all the memories i can get. hang in there.|
|Reviewed by Dave Harm
|Sorry for your lose... When everything settles down, cherish the memories, they'll last a lifetime...|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|It always is so sad when a young person dies no matter how they died.|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|A real sweet pen of such a sad moment in ones life. I'm sure she's read your thoughts. We never know when we're called home, or how our means of getting there delivers it's self. Enjoy the moments you had, and rest ashurd that she'll live forever in your thoughts.|