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Dynamic? by Kacie Rahm Wednesday, February 11, 2009 Not rated by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I came to (a new place.) I heard it (would change me) "Excitement abounds!" "You can be anyone now!" Yet I feel the same. I am no more (at ease) (intellegent) (celebrated) than I was before. I am waiting. I am patient. I am prepared to change. I am open to change. But will the supporters remain? They cheer, they watch, they anticipate. But my dynamic surroundings leave me unaffected. How long will they wait? How long will it take? And when they leave, will they take me with them?

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Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle	2/23/2009

Nice poem,take care Edwin




Reviewed by Regis Auffray	2/12/2009

A most interesting perspective, Kacie. Sure makes one think. Love and best wishes, Regis




Reviewed by John DeDakis	2/12/2009

I like the way you've taken just a few words to convey both anticipation and longing. Nice.