by Kacie Rahm
Tuesday, May 06, 2003
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Snip Snip Snip,
Everything I loved you clipped,
Everything I knew was ripped.
Cut Cut Cut,
I can feel it in my gut,
You'll forever hold me in this rut.
Tear Tear Tear,
My heart and mind you wear,
I'm surprised you'd even dare.
Now that I'm cut off,
I see how much I've missed,
I see how much I took advantage of this.
Yet the words still burn in my lips,
I couldn't let them out,
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|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Harsh but real and thus very effective, Kacie. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)
|I'm sorry you were cut off...hopefully, we'll see you back soon. Good write!|
|Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
|Kaci! I like this one, just think, you'll get it back in a bit, and you can always come to me with your venting. :) hope all is well,
|Reviewed by jing javier
|vent dear, vent away..|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Kaci, good one. Now your back.|
|Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie
|Ah me, I felt this one, I would be quite lost without my internet!
|Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)
|Keep it up.|