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| Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen |
8/21/2004 |
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Excellent verse
God Bless
Michelle~ |
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| Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty |
8/18/2004 |
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Loved this :)
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/18/2004 |
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Beautiful and uplifting write, Monica! Thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Paul Berube |
8/18/2004 |
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Monica,
Very inspirational piece. Keeping a straight path, especially in today's world, is quite a weary task but with faith and love we can endure. |
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| Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader) |
8/17/2004 |
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| this was reall y soft and nice Monica, I think that you are right, so often, there is the put on, ya know, attempting to loose oneself to the degree that one actually loses oneself, and the soul no longer enticed or with it. I guess it can happen with any thing of beauty, which demands, slowness, and even with God, I think we have to be slow, if we get too excited, it just become excitment, till we get worn down enough to know again what we should and aught to be doing ty al |
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