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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
12/25/2004 |
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| A very well executed piece, young lady. You have a gift for the parsing of words and a need to express yourself. Keep up the excellent work. |
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| Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) |
12/18/2004 |
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Truly sad beautifully written but always that piece of your hearts that bond will last for ever
Merriest Christmas Blessed Years
Tracey |
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| Reviewed by Ian Thorpe |
12/18/2004 |
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Ah but scent is the sense of memory so you may fade but you can never be erased.
I really liked this one. |
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| Reviewed by Linda Roman |
12/17/2004 |
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| a sad goodbye,, but nicely done |
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| Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) |
12/15/2004 |
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| your writing get better and better. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
12/14/2004 |
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| So sad but true, Kari. And I can totally relate to what you wrote in your "blog" regarding loneliness. Thank you for sharing this offering and best wishes of love and peace to you. Regis |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
12/14/2004 |
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| sad, but very well done! |
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| Reviewed by Sue Hess |
12/14/2004 |
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| this is wonderfully written kari |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
12/13/2004 |
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| sometimes love has a way of abandoning us ... |
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| Reviewed by Phillip William Allen |
12/13/2004 |
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| A sad but sweet departure |
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