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Goodbye
by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥

Monday, December 13, 2004
Rated "G" by the Author.
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And your scent fades from my shirt
I cling to the last sensation;
Cling onto the memories until it hurts.
And you forget the times we shared,
Moving on with your life;
Moving on without a care.
And I press my hand against the window;
Wishing away these skies.
Wishing I didn't have to go...
And my scent fades from the sheets
From your shirt; from your heartbeat
And I am but a memory, a fleeting light
Lost in your eyes; lost forever in the night.  


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Reviewed by William DeVault 12/25/2004
A very well executed piece, young lady. You have a gift for the parsing of words and a need to express yourself. Keep up the excellent work.
Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader) 12/18/2004
Truly sad beautifully written but always that piece of your hearts that bond will last for ever
Merriest Christmas Blessed Years
Tracey
Reviewed by Ian Thorpe 12/18/2004
Ah but scent is the sense of memory so you may fade but you can never be erased.
I really liked this one.
Reviewed by Linda Roman 12/17/2004
a sad goodbye,, but nicely done
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader) 12/15/2004
your writing get better and better.
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 12/14/2004
So sad but true, Kari. And I can totally relate to what you wrote in your "blog" regarding loneliness. Thank you for sharing this offering and best wishes of love and peace to you. Regis
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 12/14/2004
sad, but very well done!
Reviewed by Sue Hess 12/14/2004
this is wonderfully written kari
Reviewed by jude forese 12/13/2004
sometimes love has a way of abandoning us ...
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen 12/13/2004
A sad but sweet departure
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