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To Bleed Or Not To Bleed
by Gumby G Pokey

Tuesday, July 30, 2002

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***Yes Gumby has a dark side****


Like sabers edge sinking deeply within
Verbs, nouns, pronouns all incise ragged wounds
twisting, turning, speeding through flesh of perception.

Mouths open, expelling pointy darted syllables
words of weapons choice, slash, gash, lacerate
agonizing naïve contemplations of reasons of another


Capitulate!! As random aggressions are sharpening blades.
Shields not withstanding tormentor’s attack.
Let wounds flow devoid of pain.
Blood washes venomous tongue.

Let it bleed the parsimoniousness of others away

Let it bleed to heal







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Reviewed by June Thompson 8/24/2002
I wonder how many of these comments are as real as the words read.

I enjoyed this - read with a devilish grin.. feelings deep in me ooh they escalated.

Amy
Reviewed by April Monette 8/23/2002
beautiful! The words as as sharp as the emotion behind it.
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik 8/15/2002
you break all the molds.. yet it all fits! really enjoyable read/write! katy.
Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci 8/8/2002
This is phenomenal!!! Very piercing, I have enjoyed it thourghly!!!
Thank you!

Maria
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 7/31/2002
awesome job, gumby!! love, karen lynn in texas.
Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader) 7/30/2002
very well done for a bendable fantasy figure
(this is really good stuff)
you show great range
Reviewed by Lori Moore 7/30/2002
Very good... especially for a toy.
Reviewed by Keith Brinson 7/30/2002
Words! Aren't they powerful!? Great job!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford 7/30/2002
So Gumby has a dark side. I knew it! Good write and awareness of words.
Reviewed by Jenni Kalicharan 7/30/2002
Interesting use of language here.. Enjoyed it!!
Thank you for your comment on part one of my poem.
Jenni
Reviewed by Sailor Neptune 7/30/2002
charming ending i use to always say that and I had a gumby and pokey I loved very much ...
nice read

Gen Capluet
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