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How does it feel?
by G K Fralin

Wednesday, November 26, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I don’t know what it feels like
to jump into the air from a plane
wearing nothing but a pack and chute
to float me to the earth.
 
Does it feel like wind on a swing,
like a car wreck you know your
going to have, or does it feel like
you know you are free to fly and float,
to drop into the abyss of blue and puffed white?
 
I know what it feels like to fall.
It’s like jumping without a pack
and chute, more like a wreck of
flesh to ground and bones crushing
into the reality of what’s below.
 
I know what it’s like watching a child
fall from a cradle, unable to catch
the infants blow. I know the moment
the wee head hits the floor. I wish it was mine.
I wish it when they are thirty or more.
 
 
 
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Reviewed by 000 000 12/5/2008
I hope one day to feel the sensation of flight.
Beautiful writing!
CarolHawks
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 11/30/2008
Thought provoking and intriguing poem you have written for the reader to think about.take care

Edwin
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 11/29/2008
Interesting pen...enjoyed...be well and always safe...Hugss
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 11/27/2008
POwerful ending and the images really make the reader think of it themselves, that question in the title.



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