|Reviewed by Melissa Rives
|Ahhh...nice flow to this! Keep it up cuz!|
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|I must agree with Justin on that second stanza...it broke the flow you started off with. The poem itself was well done and I can see where it is going.
|Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
|Now...I'm waiting for part II...
Great writing--real attention grabber...
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)
|This is very good. I think the second stanza could use a little cleaning up because it just doesn't read smoothely like it should. I think it may be a bit confusing at first glance. But I do like the brooding nature of this poem, Bravo.|