|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|A stunning Cafe write, I'd love to be at one those gatherings,
with my heels off, and a smile on my face, a pad in my hand
and a night of smooth talking women and men!
Love your flow!
Much love and Warmer hugs, Warrior Goddess Purple Sheeeoox
STay POsitive! Happy and STrong! Write On! WE need to hear from ya'
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Very nicely written, Holly|
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|BRILLIANT evocation here, Daniel... almost Suzanne Vega-like. Could really see, feel and BE THERE! Very subtle atmosphere yet so striking with the strong sense of dark and light and all shades in between.
A droopy, tan luminescence
Barely brighter than sunset
No matter what time of day
... this is excellent. I could really picture it. Sadly, no... I for one won't be there at this great sounding Fair... :)) Love Kate xx
|Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa
|very talented fellow..wow!!
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Buy me a plane ticket and i will be there.....lol!!
Excellent offering....thanks for sharing my friend!!
Good to read you again!!
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a rustic feel to this as the realism is well done|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Thats me in the pickup, but you must be color blind as the truck was silver...e|
|Reviewed by Butch Howard
|Good local color and observations in this snipet of a day in the life at the Coffee Cabin. I like the way you express your observations. Nice piece!
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|I read 'Louie Armstrong' and you immediately have my attention.. I will be enjoying more of your poetry I do believe. I like your style.
|Reviewed by Jennave Coz
|Wonderful images,A pleasant trip.Thanks for taking me along.Jen|
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|As always, a remarkable image and evocation from a poet of the first water.|