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Burger at the Bar
by Daniel S. McTaggart
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Geez, I hadn't realized how long it's been since I posted. Sorry I've been slipping. Here's a ditty I composed downtown a couple weeks ago.

I don't mind a coupla buns
With some meat in the middle.
A slice of tomato and lettuce
With some cheese on the griddle.

All stacked up and melted
So it won't come apart.
Stick a fancy toothpick up top
So it goes through the heart.

Pick it up in your hands
And just squeeze it a little.
Don't you worry about
Whether the structure is brittle.

Feel the shake and shimmy
Of the slide down your throat.
It's like giving your guts
And your stomach a coat.

A waitress drops the check
While you're sitting in heaven.
An angel in a stained apron
Standing only five-seven.

She asks for a ride home
With a voice like a fiddle.
No, I don't mind a coupla buns
With a meet in the middle.

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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
What a sweet and yummy flow!
I love your honest heart and write Dan~

Warmly, Warrior Goddess Purple Sheeeoox
Write On!

STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Thanks for sharing your wit, Daniel. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Geeeez now I am hungry...for the real thingy!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Now I loved this, and your ending just put me through the roof! Nice twist.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
HA!!!!!!!!! Clever, clever you, you bad boy. :) Well done, Dan!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
missed your special brand of poetry Michael!;-) You made me hungry for the first burger...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Nice twist and a very interesting and imaginative write....

Be safe,
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
hah! very cute write! enjoyed
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
That's a cute little foxy poem, Daniel. Bouncy with flair and humor. I like those dog-on dogs too, with all the trimmings.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
I knew all along you had that sense of humor but if I am going to have something like that to eat I want mine with cheese so neat...e & r
Reviewed by William DeVault
Why, Mr. McT, I do believe you are developing a wry sense of humour!
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