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Burger at the Bar
by Daniel S. McTaggart

Friday, September 28, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Geez, I hadn't realized how long it's been since I posted. Sorry I've been slipping. Here's a ditty I composed downtown a couple weeks ago.

I don't mind a coupla buns
With some meat in the middle.
A slice of tomato and lettuce
With some cheese on the griddle.

All stacked up and melted
So it won't come apart.
Stick a fancy toothpick up top
So it goes through the heart.

Pick it up in your hands
And just squeeze it a little.
Don't you worry about
Whether the structure is brittle.

Feel the shake and shimmy
Of the slide down your throat.
It's like giving your guts
And your stomach a coat.

A waitress drops the check
While you're sitting in heaven.
An angel in a stained apron
Standing only five-seven.

She asks for a ride home
With a voice like a fiddle.
No, I don't mind a coupla buns
With a meet in the middle.

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Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G 10/1/2007
What a sweet and yummy flow!
I love your honest heart and write Dan~

Warmly, Warrior Goddess Purple Sheeeoox
Write On!

STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/29/2007
Thanks for sharing your wit, Daniel. Love and best wishes to you,

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/29/2007
Geeeez now I am hungry...for the real thingy!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 9/29/2007
Now I loved this, and your ending just put me through the roof! Nice twist.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 9/28/2007
HA!!!!!!!!! Clever, clever you, you bad boy. :) Well done, Dan!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/28/2007
missed your special brand of poetry Michael!;-) You made me hungry for the first burger...

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 9/28/2007
Nice twist and a very interesting and imaginative write....

Be safe,
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 9/28/2007
hah! very cute write! enjoyed
Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper 9/28/2007
That's a cute little foxy poem, Daniel. Bouncy with flair and humor. I like those dog-on dogs too, with all the trimmings.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 9/28/2007
I knew all along you had that sense of humor but if I am going to have something like that to eat I want mine with cheese so neat...e & r
Reviewed by William DeVault 9/28/2007
Why, Mr. McT, I do believe you are developing a wry sense of humour!
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