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Friend So Long
by Daniel S. McTaggart
Wednesday, October 10, 2007
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Betrayal carries a sting that buries beneath the skin. And it's not a nice feeling.



FRIEND SO LONG

I handed this

friend

my heart, knowing
it would
be safe

we had known
each
other

so long

ago, so brief
a time

and I trusted him
with
my heart...

as soon as I was
out
of his sight

he took one look
at it
and squeezed



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Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Sadly some people do not think before they act...

Carole~
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
It is not fun to have one mess with the heart, it is painful,, time heals,,,,
Christine
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Sounds as if you need a transplant, either of a heart or a friend...E
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
ouch!-a strong write, well done
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Ooooo this sad piece comes with a bite, so sorry.....

Be safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
Nice offering of expression, keep poetry alive!
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Very sad, all my best,holly
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Ouch. Too much of heartsqueezing in today's apathetic, don't give a damn culture. Sad. Painfully penned--and felt! Well done, Daniel.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
He'll get his someday.

Kathy
Reviewed by William DeVault
Ouch! and I know the feeling...
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