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| Reviewed by Charlie |
3/12/2008 |
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| I like the last three lines the best, where the imagery really comes alive. And "crewcut sun"...? How brilliant is that? I like the rest too, but it's got a different flavor-- general, not specific, but it sets a great atmosphere. --Charlie |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
3/2/2008 |
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| nice imagery and poem |
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| Reviewed by David Hightower |
2/18/2008 |
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| Daniel - Enjoyed the imagery you used in this poem, as in all your poems. To me it's like reading a story and pondering a painting at the same time. A world present in a diner. - David |
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| Reviewed by Michelle Mead |
2/14/2008 |
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| This gives me Barnes & Noble memories, lol, as I worked there for 12 years! A photo of a moment in words, nice work. |
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| Reviewed by William DeVault |
2/13/2008 |
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| I like the images, old friend. Very nice. |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
2/13/2008 |
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A great offering...did the same thing a few days back!!'
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/11/2008 |
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Very acute observations and tastefully expressed....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
2/11/2008 |
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| a very visually vivid write--well done |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
2/11/2008 |
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I love the way you write - you take us there with clever, memorable lines that I wish I'd thought of, dangit! LOL Well done, Daniel, indeed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
2/11/2008 |
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So hows the food in that little cafe
Sounds a place I would love to come & play
As well is it very far away...e & R |
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