|Reviewed by Charlie
|I like the last three lines the best, where the imagery really comes alive. And "crewcut sun"...? How brilliant is that? I like the rest too, but it's got a different flavor-- general, not specific, but it sets a great atmosphere. --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|nice imagery and poem|
|Reviewed by David Hightower
|Daniel - Enjoyed the imagery you used in this poem, as in all your poems. To me it's like reading a story and pondering a painting at the same time. A world present in a diner. - David|
|Reviewed by Michelle Mead
|This gives me Barnes & Noble memories, lol, as I worked there for 12 years! A photo of a moment in words, nice work.|
|Reviewed by William DeVault
|I like the images, old friend. Very nice.|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|A great offering...did the same thing a few days back!!'
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Very acute observations and tastefully expressed....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a very visually vivid write--well done|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|I love the way you write - you take us there with clever, memorable lines that I wish I'd thought of, dangit! LOL Well done, Daniel, indeed.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|So hows the food in that little cafe
Sounds a place I would love to come & play
As well is it very far away...e & R