|Reviewed by Gene Williamson
|Wonderful and all to familiar. I can see my Dad now
with his Maxwell Coffee can. - Gene.
|Reviewed by Charlie
|Fabulous-- original, and strikingly descriptive. I don't know about all that spacing though... --Charlie|
|Reviewed by Kathy Kopp
|Sounds like spring, when weather changes quickly. I like "spit some sun..." sort of like tobacco. A charming poem. Peace, from Kathy Kopp|
|Reviewed by Leann Marshall
|So unique and very true! I love the last two lines. Thanks for sharing this, Daniel|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Your visuals are always excellent, enjoyed this very much.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|DEFINITELY! AS much sun as we can get, I will take...no more rain please, Ed|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|A StormSpinner kind of write - wish I'd thought of this first - this is BRILLIANT! Well done, Daniel.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|I like this--this was today here in Utah--sun, rain, snow then sun again--clever write|
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...fine images here...words...that spit light...brilliant.