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Spit Tobacco Sun
by Daniel S. McTaggart
Saturday, March 08, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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this is the time of winter
we'll take the sun

any way we can get it.
even as it falls

in random splashes,
followed by short spells of rain.

and then clouds close up
waiting to take

another pinch from the can
and spit some sun out again.

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Reviewed by Gene Williamson 5/25/2008
Wonderful and all to familiar. I can see my Dad now
with his Maxwell Coffee can. - Gene.
Reviewed by Charlie 3/11/2008
Fabulous-- original, and strikingly descriptive. I don't know about all that spacing though... --Charlie
Reviewed by Kathy Kopp 3/10/2008
Sounds like spring, when weather changes quickly. I like "spit some sun..." sort of like tobacco. A charming poem. Peace, from Kathy Kopp
Reviewed by Leann Marshall 3/10/2008
So unique and very true! I love the last two lines. Thanks for sharing this, Daniel
Reviewed by Carole Mathys 3/10/2008
Your visuals are always excellent, enjoyed this very much.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack 3/9/2008
DEFINITELY! AS much sun as we can get, I will more rain please, Ed
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 3/9/2008
A StormSpinner kind of write - wish I'd thought of this first - this is BRILLIANT! Well done, Daniel.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 3/8/2008
I like this--this was today here in Utah--sun, rain, snow then sun again--clever write
Reviewed by John Leko 3/8/2008
...fine images here...words...that spit light...brilliant.
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