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Fisher Prince
by Huda Orfali

Wednesday, September 21, 2005
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Part One - The Heavenly Birth

Fisher Prince I - The Heavenly Birth

From the mists of the ancient past
A god was forged from a mighty blast

A tyrant ruled on earth with steel and fire
The subjects of his kingdom were in mire

They cried to the gods for salvation
Imploring them for imminent liberation

The gods held council and set a plan
To create together an unrivaled man

Endowed with the mark of the gods
They begot a champion by all odds

Destined to fight injustice and pain
On earth and end the tyrantís reign

A warrior with skills unmatched
On a perilous journey to be dispatched

To set free the wretched souls on earth
He was destined from his heavenly birth

© 2005 Huda Orfali
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Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore 5/22/2006
Ah what wondrous and exuberant expression, a tale to wake the dead! to read of lifetimes past and remember them is, above all, a testament to the eternity of love we're destined to live, oh sweet, sweet Aria. Be blessed!
Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher 5/16/2006
A strong and wonderful write!
Birgit and Roger
Reviewed by Peter Paton 5/11/2006
This tour de force has much potential in it to be exploited to the so...with all your might and power and imagination
Love and Light
Reviewed by Sara Coslett 9/25/2005
If only it were this easy. Personally I think the power to rid ourselves of tyrannts rests within each of us. We just don't know we have that strength. Well written. ~ Sara
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 9/24/2005
wonderful write, huda; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 9/22/2005
Very nicely created, Huda. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace, my friend.

Reviewed by Felix Perry 9/22/2005
Interesting and wonderful vision that promises to entice the reader back for more.

Reviewed by Chris Archer 9/21/2005
Looking forward to reading about the journey of Fisher Prince
Amazing tale and wonderful couplets
God bless
Reviewed by Sandy Knauer 9/21/2005
Nice job, Huda. This created a unique sensation. The rhytym lulled, while the message jolted.
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes 9/21/2005
Stunninf offering Huda!!

Oh I loved your podcast offering.....very well done!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by jude forese 9/21/2005
excellent imagery within this inspired couplets!

excellent recital on PodCast!
Reviewed by Michael Wells 9/21/2005
I recognize the theme from the story "Fisher Prince" in your book Blue Fire. It was quite a mythological tale that I enjoyed very much.
I love the poem too
Reviewed by E T Waldron 9/21/2005
Superb poem written in splendid couplets. Love the theme!
Look forward to more Huda!;-)


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