|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|=*=*=* IF WE DON’T HAIL ZEUS JUSTICE WILL PREVAIL.*=*=*=
ON THIS TUESDAY, (TIUS’ DAY) DEDICATED TO MARS, BY THE ROMAN-GREEK EMPIRE, CELEBRATED IN EVERY PROVINCE OF IT$ $PIRITUAL REALM$, – I salute You, Poets!
Health, Creativity, Wisdom, Justice and Prosperity.
An inspiring composition... "Stairway to Heaven" takes the reader on a trip to dream and delivers a rainbow of colors of harmony.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
|Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
|When this day comes, it'll be as if the sky were falling. entire world paradigms will change and the lion will lay down with the lamb. beautiful and soulful expression, you two. you work well together.|
|Reviewed by richard cederberg
|Very lovely image and a poem filled with hope and expectation.
|Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher
|You two did excellent work here, beautiful,
Birgit and Roger
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|You guys, this is beautiful, so full of the real love..
|Reviewed by Aberjhani
|A powerful declaration of humanity's potential to rise above our tendencies for alienation, bigotry, and destruction to achieve true harmony and grace. Wonderful concept and wonderful lines from two exceptionally gifted pens.
|Reviewed by Paul Williams
|Excellent collab you two, powerful and poigniant images that shine with hope.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|Stunning collaboration and write, Huda and Peter; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|A wonderful collaborative offering. Peace is the only way this world will be "saved." Cute baby pic in your bio, Huda; and thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Michael Wells
|Huda, this reminds me of your poem "Share Jerusalem"
Peace is the way, the dream and breath
That shall bring life after years of Death.
© 2005 Huda Orfali
Well done, prophets of peace
God bless - Michael
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Great collaboration you two!!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|What truly awesome chemistry between you two! To produce such a gifted work! This is so full of wisdom with the duality of life expressed as only two fine poets can do! Bravo!
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Great joining of East to West, faith to faith, woman to man in this duet that rings the truth as it should be. Well done Huda and Peter.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|I thought the visual was a bronze eye when the page first popped up.... and no wonder!! A visionary write of insight and understanding that trains the heart in the ways of a hard-won peace: no pain, no gain. As long as there is anything other than selflessness in the mind of man, he will always turn his face towards domination or conquest. Sadly the horrors of war are the outcome. A most noble collaboration, nobly expressed. TY and may you both be blessed in your endeavours. This contains elements of both the hawk and the dove, the soldier and the ballerina. Very visceral and beautiful. LOL Kate xx|