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First
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Liz Cosline
Wednesday, February 11, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Thinking
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First
It is a dream
A childhood wonder
Then still thought about
It becomes a vision
Of how things might be
Of possibility
Then
The feeling stir
There seems to be a way
The obstacles don't matter
It is about you
About your life
About your essense
Your reason
To be filled you must follow
Because
It started with --First.
copyright - Liz Cosline
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| Reviewed by Rose Rideout |
2/19/2009 |
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Absolutely excellent, dreams are our way of life from or to. thank you for sharing Liz.
Newfie Hugs, Rose |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
2/18/2009 |
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Excellent poem,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
2/14/2009 |
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| I understand well these words to First. It follows in a sequence in our lives, and we have opportunities to turn our lives around for the better too all the time. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
2/12/2009 |
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The way most dreams and desires begin and how wonderful to have the opportunity to follow them through....
Be always safe,
Karen |
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