Hated, Bloody, & Unrepaired
by Lisa M Johnson
Thursday, August 01, 2002
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Choke you ungrateful bastard, as I slit your throat with a smile on my face. Pray you fucking peice of shit, so "god" can save us both.
Suffer you shameful fucking whore, for the pain you put me though. Hate me and HATE ME -you soulless FUCK, because I hate you more.
Forget your god ignorant fucker, he left the minute you were born. Listen to screams of hatred so true , as I tear out your heart with my bloody hands.
You stripped me of all my purity - The second you touched my flesh.
Now watch very closey as I rip out your eyes - Such a bloody mess...
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|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Sorry, I don't like this kind of poem Lisa!!!!!
Well, that's just me and my humble opinion, I guess.....I can't speak for all, as you've got some 10's.
Sorry I'm quite sad to read this, and I'll have to give you a "9", hope I have not offended you.
Please keep writing......and smile.
Sandie Angel :o( / May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by William Sowman
|Lisa, here is a happy song to sing as you vent your feelings.
I'm a pretty kitten can't you see?
But something evil got hold of me!
My switchblade love wants to set you free
and send you off to your destiny.
I'm a kitten a sweet little thing
I will jump around and prance and sing,
And then slit your throat when you giggle
so I can watch you spin and wiggle.
Oh sweet little thing sweet little thing
It's switchblade love in the early spring,
If the cuts I make can make you sing
will you buy me a wedding ring?
Oh my switchblade love my switchblade love
did you descend from Heaven above?
Oh switchblade love little furry thing
Can you make all of the birdies sing?
Oh switchblade love switchblade love
Is the Devil the one you love?
You're a little kitten oh so sweet
Will you share your switchblade love?
Your switchblade love
Your switchblade love
© William M. Sowman
|Reviewed by Gregory Sonn
WOW!!! What a completely powerful piece! now tell us how you really feel!
Very passionate, coming from a place deep inside. I can feel the pain in this.
wonderful venting. Gregg
|Reviewed by Larry Skahill (Reader)
I hope you got some of it out of your system (whatever it is)
|Reviewed by Sailor Neptune
This is venon intense...
|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|Aaah intense hatred I feel. Keep writing and spewing the venom. We all need this once in a while coz there are enuff a$$holes around... :)|