|Reviewed by Marilyn Barnicke Belleghem M.Ed.
|Old shoes are also filled with memories. Nice piece.|
|Reviewed by Mike Bayles
|It's simple, but says a lot.|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|nice powerful little poem. flexiblity is great|
|Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
|This brings to mind the many shoes that my father use to wear as he hiked the country trails.The art of walking sometimes seems faded.Great poem.|
|Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic
love 'em short n' sweet..
|Reviewed by atti? _
|For me this seemed out of place. The entire vibe of the poem itself really suggested to me that it would have much more suited for a haiku format to justify the length and it would have forced you to really work for each line to individually mean something while still supporting the overall meaning of the work. To me, it was a very relateable topic which is cool, but I just felt like the metaphor was too straight forward for its own context. These quick snappy poems are entirely hit or miss in the sense that either that have to just bleed emotive technique and feeling or they have to be very thought provoking, while this just was all there. Sorry, I'm sure it's just a personal prefferense kind of thing. Nice poem, just not really my style.|
|Reviewed by rachel baughman
|i like new shoes.
they make new paths
walk in new direction
leaving it's owner
and it's new trails
with a clean slate.
*i really liked what you had written here. I had to add my own little piece, i hope you do not mind. I can't wait to see what is to come.
|Reviewed by M'Lyssa Fairchild
|Comfortable is a fantastic place in which to be. I love the simple truth in this piece.|
|Reviewed by Christine Christine (Reader)
|I agree with Susan (: great poem!
|Reviewed by Arthur Tugman
|Love your poetry.
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|true to life
Loved this piece
thanks for sharing
Love & Peace
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Well said, Rosemarie. And this is symbolic. Love and peace,
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|So do I! Comfort and character taking precedence over flash now. New shoes can give you blisters, but once worn in they can be like old shoes, too. And those blisters can teach us. Enjoyed Rosemarie...
|Reviewed by Robert Montesino
|There is great comfort in things familiar, they help feel at ease in our own skins. Old shoes can be like that to.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Great write and perhaps similiar to my own write of a few weeks back entitled Old Boots, except you seemed to have said a whole lot more with a lot less words. Great job.
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|This is really good! Very creative thought,and so true!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|LOLOL, so many use that term or similar...."I feel I've know you forever Andy." I understand this so much..|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|I like old shoes, too. But I like your poem more.