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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
9/25/2009 |
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Very interesting. For me, there's a balance of happiness and isolation. Great poem.
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by Robert Montesino |
9/4/2008 |
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| Wow R. got your newsletter and followed the link to flicker and read this poem, so profound and inspiring and it was good to hear you are finally done with you latest book project & your going to work on your fiction novel! You've got so much going on, nothing left to say but to hope you prosper in all you do! Many Blessing! |
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| Reviewed by Leann Marshall |
3/26/2008 |
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This could be read different ways--I see peace and beauty on one side of the glass, disturbing images on the other.
Lovely writing, thanks for sharing this.
Leann |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
11/14/2007 |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
10/30/2007 |
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Loved the last two lines of the ending:
"Knowing they were
On the other side of the glass."
A very nice piece. |
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| Reviewed by Cynth'ya cynthyaspeaks@gmail.com |
10/26/2007 |
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Surreal Sis Rosemarie.
blessin's
cynth'ya lewis reed |
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| Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed |
9/20/2007 |
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These are beautiful lines. Thank you for sharing.
Jibril |
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| Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten |
8/5/2007 |
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I used to work in a gallery where very exquisite jewelry was sold. Time and time again, couples would come in and spend hours trying on certain pieces. The scene unfolding here as you watched them through the glass brought to mind my own thoughts, as both reflected those same marked torches reaching to the sky!
Very well done!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~ |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
7/31/2007 |
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Your verses are like a movie for me. A very fine one. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/17/2007 |
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Riveting and definately conjures up ideas and images that tantalize the brain as one thinks of that glass.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
7/17/2007 |
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Well written piece of art work. I can the images in my mind.
George |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
7/17/2007 |
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Haunting imagery....well penned!!
Love Tinka |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
7/17/2007 |
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Lovely...haunting.
Elizabeth |
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