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| Reviewed by Susan Cook-Jahme |
6/22/2007 |
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Hi retta...just popping in to visit old AD friends and enjoyed reading this wonderful poem.
Susan
myspace.com/happyscribbler |
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| Reviewed by Handsum Hart |
5/20/2007 |
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Splendid poetic work, two thumbs up I'd say.
Best wishes
HH |
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| Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader) |
5/19/2007 |
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| Magical and mystical words, my friend. Touching poetry! Lydi** |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
5/15/2007 |
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| Deeply moving poem |
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| Reviewed by P-M Terry Lamar |
4/28/2007 |
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Reindeer,
Lovely. Emotional. Moving.
I'm glad I found your work. It will take me awhile to read all your poems, but I'm looking forward to it.
Terry |
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| Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara |
4/13/2007 |
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Rhetta,
As always your imagery is captivating, the emotion projected right on cue to the reader and your thoughts and feelings so extremely well conveyed!!! This is beautiful and indeed haunting! So great to be back and read your work again!
~Nikki~ |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
4/12/2007 |
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enchanting write, retta. reminds me of my childhood new england woodland & the hypnotic pull of its dusk-tinted hollows.
masterful work.
peace,
carolyn |
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| Reviewed by Aberjhani |
4/12/2007 |
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The more I read THE HAUNTED FOREST the more I sensed a blessing preparing to emerge out of the shadows of doubt and regret. Then sure enough, there it was: "peeking from behind a tree." Beautiful.
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| Reviewed by Jeff Mason |
4/8/2007 |
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| Pardon me, but OMG!!! Ahem, Rhetta! THIS is more of what we need. I can't even BEGIN to tell you how utterly beautiflly rendered this is; the imagery is explosive in it's subtle undertones that burst into the reader's mind and soul. Be still my heart, indeed!!! Major large sigh... from this admirer of your pen! Happy Easter if you celebrate it. -- Jeff |
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| Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green |
3/29/2007 |
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How does it feel to get it right every time? As always, you have created a vivid and haunting scene that is both touching and
thought-provoking. Enviable!! 'Pea'xOx |
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| Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper |
3/29/2007 |
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| hello Reatta, great poetic story. I love the great outdoors also but not at night. things get kind of spooky then |
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| Reviewed by William Bonilla |
3/25/2007 |
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Yearing for a love one
a beautiful hauting write Retta
most enjoyable piece
Love & Peace
William |
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| Reviewed by CJ Heck |
3/21/2007 |
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Oh Retta, this is so poignant, so hauntingly beautiful. I was there. Your words took me with you. This is amazing and so well-written that I had goosebumps as I read. Very well done.
Love,
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/20/2007 |
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| This is so compelling, Retta, and the narrative speaks so keenly of the nature of the life that was shared with rich images - love the long-limbed trees which I have read as bearing HER name! But, not too far from the truth, I guess. Beautiful ending and the keeness of detail with the tattooed bark being so much higher... Conjures also the distance between adulthood and the child. I was truly drawn into this heartfelt tale. TY Kate xx |
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| Reviewed by Heather White |
3/20/2007 |
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| That was so sad Rein, I pray everything is okay with you, it's been a while, excellent but tear jerking write |
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| Reviewed by J M |
3/18/2007 |
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This is so masterful you took us along in this journey a refreshing and visual feast. Thank you.
Peace,
Joselyn |
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| Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero |
3/18/2007 |
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Great conclusion, Reindeer. Great to read you again!
Carmen |
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| Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® |
3/17/2007 |
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Hi Reindeer,
So good to read you again! You are where you need to be ... of this, I'm sure. Blessings.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph* |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
3/17/2007 |
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| Retta, this is truly stunning. |
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| Reviewed by David Young |
3/17/2007 |
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| Very good imagery of pure trnquility! |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
3/17/2007 |
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| I could feel the "Spirits" and the emotions........I would of stayed too :-) |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
3/16/2007 |
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| you bring the heart of the forest and its impact on you into focus in this beautiful and endearing poem ... |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
3/16/2007 |
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A place of dreams, dreams lost, of childhood fantasy. A place that draws you back time and time again. Beautiful.
Be safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/16/2007 |
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I felt myself holding my breath as I read this in hushed silence. It is full of ethereal beauty Reindeer! You always touch the deepest parts with your poetry!
Eileen |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
3/16/2007 |
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There is no end to the beauty that you see and experience as evidenced in this beautiful piece.
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry |
3/16/2007 |
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Your style is so refreshing and easy to breeze through.
The forest of mysteries.
Thanks,
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| Reviewed by Laura Mayer |
3/16/2007 |
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Hi Retta
I think this is my first time reading your work, and it is absolutely breathtaking, suspenseful and peaceful at the same time. Beautifully done. Your title caught my attention, as I love writes about hauntings.
Hugs, Laura |
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| Reviewed by Tinka Boukes |
3/16/2007 |
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Have to agree with Gwen here!!
I am always touched by your writes!!
Love Tinka
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| Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson |
3/16/2007 |
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| So melancholy and beautifully descriptive! Your writing always enchants! Good to read you again! Blessings! |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) |
3/16/2007 |
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Retta, such a pleasure to read you again. A delightful haunting work. One thing about being alone, you are in the best company of someone who truly appreciates what you can do, and who you are. And you are special. What a terrific picture too.
Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/16/2007 |
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The mood and feelings that you have shared via your verses reach into the soul of the reader. Thank you, Retta. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader) |
3/16/2007 |
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| You decided to stay, being a brave man, I'd have run away, faster than a gazelle.... Beaut work, yup us brits are known for our bravery..lol |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/16/2007 |
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Stunning, captivating and carries the mind off to that forest and the soft voice narrated this poignant story in the mist. Beautiful piece of work Retta.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
3/16/2007 |
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Your words and lines float off the page into our hearts, My Friend.
It is good to see you working, again, and to read another of your deeper poems. Over the years, I recall that you kept getting better, making me wonder about an apex. Now, I know... you don't even know what that means. Lovelly and loving is this poem. - Bill
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| Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr. |
3/16/2007 |
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Beautiful work Retta!
Peace,
Bill |
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
3/16/2007 |
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(((Reindeer)))
Where you been, girl? I have missed you so much! Welcome back!
You haven't lost your magical style; very beautiful and poignant write! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
3/16/2007 |
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Retta,
It is so good to see you posting again. You've been missed.
As for this poem, beautiful imagery and poignancy ring in each line; extremely effective! Well done.
(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla. |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
3/16/2007 |
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you've been gone too, too, long
I love the forest and have been
lost in the forest before. That
is a scary feeling for sure.
Love your work...... |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Richerson |
3/16/2007 |
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| I love this, Reindeer! felt as if I were walking through the forest with you, alive with wonder and a touch of fear. I found myself reading quickly first time through to see what you would do (follow? stay behind?) and thoroughly enjoyed each image second time around. Dawn |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/16/2007 |
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I always loved this forest,
Each long limbed tree has a name,
I know every trail and where it leads by heart.
On long winter nights these woods are haunted-
I've missed your poems, Reindeer, and I especially like this one since I love the forest as well. And although your forest may be haunted, it holds some wonderful memories, too, and I'm glad to hear that you decided to stay. |
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