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I Don't Want to Fall by Sara Carlson Monday, February 28, 2005 Rated "PG13" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan
I don’t want to fall I don’t want to fall But you make me unbalanced You steady me until you’ve lost your patience Then I’m left to fall again I don’t give up because I know you’ll be back again Only then to leave my heart dangling I hope that you’ll stay once I don’t want to fall

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Reviewed by Sandy Knauer	2/28/2005

I say kick him/her to the curb and get a cane ;-) Nice job.




Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)	2/28/2005

Yes it is sad and says a lot with a few short verses.




Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado	2/28/2005

sad write, but so very well done! i don't want to fall either; i hate falling down! (i tend to fall a lot; my balance isn't good.) (((HUGS))) and love, your (wobbly) texas friend, karen lynn. :)