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| Reviewed by Courtnie |
2/8/2003 |
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i really like this, especially since i can also relate it to me...and some ppl are so oblivious *achem*^^^^
*~*Courtnie*~* |
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| Reviewed by na na (Reader) |
2/8/2003 |
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Sara, some guys are wonderful until they feel they haave completed their conquest, then it is off to the races again for them,
and they don't worry who they leave behind. Bill Murray |
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| Reviewed by Jack Roberts |
2/8/2003 |
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Great write Sara!
Jack |
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| Reviewed by Nancy D. |
2/8/2003 |
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Outstanding piece, emotions pouring out.
Nancy |
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| Reviewed by CJ |
2/8/2003 |
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again, outstanding...i loved this line:One minute you love me, the next you don’t
You promise you will but really, you won’t
I understand wut you mean there and i hope everything turns out ok..dont blame yourself he's the one who's blind, for he still hasn't seemed to see what a great catch you are! Who else can write like this! LoL!
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Smith |
2/8/2003 |
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| The worst part is not knowing. Once we know what the problem is, we feel that we have a chance in solving it. One guaranteed chance is prayer. It's a powerful thing. I have been right where this poem takes me so many times. It sucks bad. Beautifully done and heartfelt. Love, Beth |
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| Reviewed by Lori Moore |
2/8/2003 |
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| Rage said it all... Great piece. |
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| Reviewed by a a (Reader) |
2/8/2003 |
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| Amazing piece. For a friend? For a lover? Why would someone leave like that? A great piece. |
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