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The Blue Of Your Eyes
by Sara Carlson

Sunday, July 27, 2003

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I think it's a great poem, as it also is not one of my own but of one of my best friends, Nora Fazioli, so please put your reviews to her :)

The Blue of Your Eyes

The blue of your eyes is captivating

When I stare into them, I melt

Two oceans that lead into my heart

Two skies that cloud my soul

If I reach into them

Iíll never come back

Iíll be trapped forever

In the blue of your eyes

You have a hold on me

That cannot be broken

A hold so deep and blue

For the hug of your face is pure

And the kiss of your eyes is true

The Blue of Your Eyes

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Reviewed by Mary Anne McGuiness (Reader) 8/7/2003
its great....i like it a lot...me personally, i am not aware enough to notice poeples eyes color...jk...its a great poem
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader) 7/28/2003
Beautiful.
Reviewed by Zenith Elliott 7/28/2003
very romantic write, great job! ~Z~
Reviewed by Dre 7/27/2003
I think this is great! Very well written.
Reviewed by Erica Ivory 7/27/2003
Nora...

The Blue of Your Eyes

The blue of your eyes is captivating

When I stare into them, I melt

Two oceans that lead into my heart

Two skies that cloud my soul

If I reach into them

Iíll never come back

Iíll be trapped forever

In the blue of your eyes

You have a hold on me

That cannot be broken

A hold so deep and blue

For the hug of your face is pure

And the kiss of your eyes is true

The Blue of Your Eyes

Prisoner of the soul.. Prisoner of blue.. Just beautiful!!!!
Reviewed by Courtnie 7/27/2003
hey i think this is awesome i love the analogies and everything its simple yet deep

Keep Writing
*~*Courtnie*~*
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