NEVER GIVE UP
by BB Adams
Sunday, December 21, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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I walk the dark streets, with unreleased relief from the heat. Pressure surrounds me with silent pain underneath, impecunious reality so I must beseech. Hope standing before me, yet to far to reach. Can't understand my demise, yet everyday I still must rise and breathe. And so again indeed I must try, and try and try and try. Until I succeed.
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|Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello
|Hello BB Adams,
Very moving and intensely worded. They say "try and try until you die." Only the dead stop trying, so live on...
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|An excellent poem on never giving up hope,take care
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Perserverence and inner strength mixed with the right attitude, wonderful.....
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Susan Smith
|These words embody the indominable spirit. There is a basis for lyrics in a heart felt song here.|
|Reviewed by Terry Robertson
|I like this a lot. Don't we all feel these universal feelings? Well crafted and an excellent write.|