|Reviewed by Cynth'ya firstname.lastname@example.org
|erum: I see you haven't submitted anything for a while and that all of the poetry has hurt. I'm sure that if you look deep enough, you'll find a victory lesson with each heartache, and that my dear poet, is the most thrilling reason to continue to write.
blessings, and dig a little deeper in your soul. You'll find diamond lessons hidden there.
cynth'ya lewis reed
|Reviewed by Robert Williams
|Greetings in Peace,
Ghazaali told us in his Mishkaat Al-Anwaar that men who do not know the mystic's vision are like beasts in that they do not rise to the heights of which a man is capable; they are worse in that they do not live up to their potential "for beasts are not given the wings on which to fly to that unseen world".
But the man who, unlike the beast, has had knowledge of God and had known Him, but lost Him suffer the pain of separation. It is a true Hell, the result of moral failure and intellectual nerve.
We should remind ourselves that our elders show us the value of organized religion, that it serves to firm the resolve of those of us who are not prone to philosophical inquiry or moral self-discipline. The ritual and symbols help to bring about a mental framework that allows God's Grace to present Truth.
But watch out for Shaytaan, the whisperer of all that you don't like to hear!
Peace in our time.
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Loved this write ! I could see happiness up under the silver clouds|
|Reviewed by Cles Wilson
|Reviewed by Urbaz Dar (Reader)
|I can see where youre coming from, it's as if youre a stanger amongst your own. Well done! And carrying on from Justin...you definately arent a Londoner, all this country gives us is rain...but to have someone who you love with you...seasons dont matter!|
|Reviewed by uzair
|this poem is great i like this poem very much keep it up it was the mind of a child when the rain is falling
KEEEP IT UPPPP (D)
|Reviewed by Justin Wolf (Reader)
|Mood reflects atmosphere. I like it. It's a good thing you don't live in Seattle... or do you? ;). Bravo.|
|Reviewed by Anis Ul Rehman
|"As you are not here
You are not with me
With out you it seems as if the clouds are crying with me...."
No one has ever got this "YOU", it all lives in the mind. If U wanna meet that "YOU" go find in Ur own mind, I M sure U will meet him & never ever be Cheerless.
Well, U have expressed Ur feelings really well.
|Reviewed by Masarat Daud (Reader)
|You've created the atmosphere wonderfully. Good write gurl - I hope you cheer up soon. Life's nto worth it u know (experience says!) ;)|