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by Drew S Bartley

Monday, January 12, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A poeam about someone who is close and dear to me, or use to be. Now this person is being torn away from everything and everyone because of dishonesty and negativity.

so burnt out,
so bellicose.
I implore you to hold your tongue tonight.
where did you go?
where is your faith?
Proclivity to stay and fight.

Stop being deceitful
i will hold my head under water
until all this becomes useful.
restricted blood flow,
once close now unapproachable.
I beg you to just take this slow.

could this really be?
All you have toward this place.
Enchant the ocean as your body free floats.
just like is use to be, always with a smile on your face.
I am so tired or seeing you this way.
Honestly worn out on undertaking.
Slow but vehement,


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Reviewed by Sandra Corona 1/13/2009
Young love carries a LOT of impact as, at that age, we seem a bundle of nerve endings.

Well expressed,
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 1/13/2009
Expressly emotional and very well written...

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Liana Margiva 1/13/2009
Very nice!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 1/13/2009
I hope this person gets all the help that he or she gets after reading this poem and sharing your feelings.take care


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