The Lonelest Place in the World
by shalanda y cox
Rated "G" by the Author.
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i was feeling really depressed when i wrote this
come follow me
were are we going
i'll show you
its very sad but you'll like it
its so lonely
its the lonelest place in the world
why is it lonely?
you'll find out
but hurry or we'll never make it
just a little farter
we're almost there
at the lonelest place in the world
ain't it sad this place
what do i call it
this place thats easy
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|Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
|Our hearts are very susceptible to be casted into loneliness.
Draw yours pink and turn up the beat!
Dance in life, even if you must dance alone! Kimmy Van Kooten
Love and Peace~
|Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
|This is a heartfelt and beautiful poem.I enjoy reading it.Let your talent and beauty shine through like the sun and everything will be alright.I like the picture in your bio and your baby is adorable,take care
|Reviewed by 000 000
|Oh my goodness little one...this is writing from the heart and soul!
You have that darling baby in your bio picture...therefore no reason ever to be so sad.
You keep writing in this style and your wings will unfold as your take flight!!!
Love and Sunshine to you, CarolHawks