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The sun's rays over the lawn... ...take me way beyond the immediate.


Creation


Before my eyes
The sudden light
Of dawn
Reveals
Upon the jeweled carpet
Of the lawn
The wondrous birth
Of a universe

A million brilliant shimmering orbs
Spherical rainbow planets
Shine
Against the backdrop
Of an emerald eternity

I god
I dare not trod
Further

Lest I destroy
What I did not create



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October 2004
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Reviewed by lois christensen
Not to repeat some of the words in these reviews from others which are numerous in each of your poems, Regis, I think of different words to say = for this one I repeat some of the other reviewers - Brilliant,A work of Art, a Wonderful message,Awesome, fantastic, splendid. just in my opinion, I would be with you and not destroy that which I did not create.
Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
Beautiful poem yet not sure what you mean by the phrase "I god"...
Reviewed by The Poetess
Brilliant! Love the flow and wisdom here.
Reviewed by Inspire Hope
Absolutely beautiful Regis.....what a beauty makes my day even brighter! Thank you so much for sharing and for caring! God bless
and keep you always in His Tender Care!


Much Love,
Margaret
Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
Hi Regis, You are a creator, none the less... a god of words and limericks...you have to know that. This makes me appreciate creation more.... thank you for that...

In Spirit,
Bear
Reviewed by Milton Handfield
Another work of art. I wish i could utilize the way you do. A remainder of the splenders of nature.

cheers
Milton
Reviewed by Michelle Mead
you are SUCH a great writer, Reg, you make me nuts when you say you are not
Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Regis,

Love the picture; it's beautiful and it brings your poem to life. Again, one must be humble to have these feelings. This poem speaks of a time when you must have been feeling an inch tall in comparison to God's work. Lovely imagery~

Sheila
Reviewed by Jolen Whitworth
A wonderful message. Finely crafted, it leaves the reader plenty of room. It reminds me of a quote I love...

"You can tear a poem apart to see what makes it tick... The best craftsmanship always leaves holes and gaps... so that something that is not in the poem can creep, crawl, flash or thunder in."
-- óDylan Thomas
Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Powerful! Outstanding message.
I loved the picture as well.

Patti
Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
A beautiful tribute to nature.

Janet
Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
All that He gave to us, all the wonders we have to enjoy, he asks only that we preserve and enjoy all of creation, feel free to tred where you please and soak up the wonders of creation.

Lovely write Regis
Peace be with you
Ch'erie
Reviewed by Fr. Kurt Messick
:-)
Reviewed by Pier Tyler
You, a creative poet, have a way of making us feel and visualize what you write.
Reviewed by Reverend Davey (Reader)
Very visual! Really good. Now I mustlook to see if I can see any rainbows! If I can get up that early!


Blessings, Rev Davey
Reviewed by Franz Kessler
Gentle and generous appeal to live the very moment. Wonderful ambience in this verbal picture of love and light. Franz
Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
I still think you should be an artist. try photography.

Connie
Reviewed by Lori Moore
Awesome message. The ending is fantastic.
Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
fantastic poem!
Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Excellently Done Good Weary Of (God) Path My Feet Have Trod,i.e. You Regis Have No Need To Fear (God) Or TRASK!

TRASK
Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Regis,

"Creation" creatively yours - mastered to perfection ... thanks for this one, my friend!!

Robert
Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reverential awe and wonder on a micro and macro-scale here, Regis! Love this both-ends-of-the-telescope write and you have skilfully captured both omnipotence and fragility in just a few delicately crafted and kaleidoscope lines. Your last 18 syllables neatly communicate what libraries of books fail to! What a gift! TY Kate xx
Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Love the imagery, very moving
poem Regis. Thank you for sharing
with me! Super Duper Job!
Love,
Becca
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Compelling imagery, Regis. Very much enjoyed.
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Deep poem, awesome picture. Good job!
Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
You are so good at creating and projecting images with your words, it almost feels like I'm there as an observer, and not a reader. Great work, Regis.

Carmen :-)
Reviewed by jude forese
truly fantastic work! the last five lines are outstanding ... the imagery of the entire poem is very vivid ...
Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reg...You are a wondrous poet....as your work of arts show...
This is simply a terrific compositon which gives a fascinating insight
into the morning dew of heaven...
Peter
Reviewed by William Bonilla
Well Penned ...Regis
most enjoyable piece

William ....Peace
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
(((o, my, regis)))

thought provoking, and powerfully visualized through your glorious pen! GORGEOUS! literally took my breath away--BRAVO!

i pray you are well, dear (((friend))), i miss you :(

(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Reviewed by E T Waldron
A beautiful reverence in this superb poem Regis!
Thank you for sharing! eileen
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Spherical rainbow planets
Shine

so lyrical!
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
Terrific stuff, mon ami! LOVE it! Well done; magnifique!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
this is amazing as usual Regis, Keep up the great work!!
Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Spendidly penned Regis

Blue skies and sunshine
Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
Great images of the morning dew Regis
Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
Beautiful...imagine all the little worlds in each drop of dew! Lovely poetry Regis - as always.
Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Regis....you have captured the moment perfectly my friend....such a delightful write from you yet again....keep up the great work you are doing...never stop to write....love n luck...BHUWAN
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
intersting Reg, I did one similar to this called a "thousand Universes." back some time. Enjd the read. We are God's over the lower creations. G
Reviewed by Ann Marquette
love it...
thanks Regis
Reviewed by john zimmerman
you have captured the luminous beauty of the momrnt --

well done


j+
Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Magnificent creation, Regis.
Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Regis my friend, I needed the peace and beauty of this poem today. Michelle
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
This is pure beauty Regis!!

Love Tinka
Reviewed by Janet Parker
I really like the way you form pictures with words. This one is vivid and beautiful.
Janet
Reviewed by A PAX
ohhhhh lovely!!
secret worlds in the grass!!
Reviewed by Kate Clifford
Love it!
Reviewed by George Carroll
Superb imagery for your creation
Reviewed by Gaye Dale (Reader)
Beautiful Regis.
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
You created a beautiful poem herein and the picture is another wonderful creation both by god, you sir Regis...Find Peace, Ed & rufuz
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