|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
In the moment
Before dawn comes of age
The sun a mere surreal hue
Behind dark hills in the east
You are on the edge
Balanced on a filament
Between darkness and light
Hell and heaven
These are great lines here Regis. Mastefully done!!!
|Reviewed by Janet Bellinger
|Love that fugue not really awake yet time. Best time for writing.
|Reviewed by Jackie (Micke) Jinks
|Beautiful, colorful words, that so magicly image the pic. Ironic that I should read this just after "The Gloaming". - M|
|Reviewed by Sandra Corona
|Feelings FELT are real ... whether the rest is might be debatable. Would it matter? As long as one is content and it does no harm, let things rest in comfort :)!
Beautiful poem and art ... as always :).
|Reviewed by L. Figgins
|These are more like visions into our souls. There are lessons to be learned if we can decipher them..."seemingly seeks to split your soul"...they can be quite frightening! An excellent interpretation, Regis. The language is strung as tight as that filament.|
|Reviewed by M. B.
|Extremely colorful and graceful.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Yes you have captured your morning vision perfectly. well done old friend.
|Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
|Very beautiful. Charismatic, surreal pictures. I'm very fond of this kind of poetry.|
|Reviewed by andrea coltman
|Fabulous piece, Regis, fantastic imagery...best wishes Andrea|
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|"Was it really just a dream?" That's the question
right. Great piece!
|Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
|Wow Regis This really is intense. Such a true poem of the real life we all live - Between two worlds ...seemingly seeks to split your soul -
Picture is almost as awesome as your poem could just stare at that for hours.
Thank You Regisxo
|Reviewed by Huda Orfali
|Reluctantly you will not succumb
I love that line.
Beautiful masterpiece, as always, regis.
Love and peace, Huda
|Reviewed by D May (Reader)
|Wonderful poem Regis. : )|
|Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
|wonderful imagery. I enjoyed this|
|Reviewed by Phillip William Allen
|One great pen Regis|
|Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Between 2 Worlds Is Only That Great Divide Whence Where Upon You Get To Meet Me, TRASK & (God) Damned- My Out Of Control Little Children...
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|truly a nice piece Reg. cherry interesting. G|
|Reviewed by Franz Kessler
|Creative write that also, beyond dazzling imagery, emulates emotions of hope and amazement. Franz|
|Reviewed by Birdie Houston
|Strong write powerful which makes you think aloud !!!|
|Reviewed by S H (Reader)
|Hi Regis. I haven't forgotten you! Great piece as usual.|
|Reviewed by ♥ Kari Hirshey ♥ (Reader)
|Such beautiful imagery.. you have a true talent for captivating your readers and making them question what is reality and what is their own imagination... great write,
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|Ah.... loved the pic
and the images you brought
|Reviewed by Pier Tyler
|You take us on this ride, right up to the edge. Magical or real, it can be both, it's how you look at it. Splendid write as well as the art.|
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Regis..its always a joy to read you and learn from you....you fill your poems with deep emotions...this one is exceptional...cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN!!!!!|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|It did seem more real, didn't it. On the cutting edge.|
|Reviewed by Faye Enno (Reader)
|Very, very nice!|
|Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
|This is an awesome capture of a rare moment, so well expressed. Thanks, Regis.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Outstanding piece Regis!!
|Reviewed by Sarah Tagert
|Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz
|Captured 'in the millisecond,' as a photographer might catch that
rainbow in a dewdrop, just before the sun moves away from it.
|Reviewed by Regina Pounds
|Evocative. Regis, you hit upon something important with your topic here...we tend to let the reality of day mute our connection with nature and spirit.
Happy New Year to you!
|Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger
|Filled with exceptional imagery and it’s a wonderful poem. Excellent work, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|WOW! C'est magnifique, mon ami!! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, ton ami, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Paix et amour a toi!
|Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain
Sensational imagery my friend - the poetic depth in which you write is superlative!!
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Heart-stopping and mind-splitting, Regis, I just love this poetic capture of a specific moment in time that miraculously recurs day after day! So often, we miss "the" moment and have hazy ideas that the dawn is a rising, sinuous colour-stream. But, as you so well imagise here, it is a sharp rending of light and dark asunder when that split-second moment happens. Thank you for reminding me again of this fantastic truth which I wish I was alert enough to seek out more often! This is strong and powerful and very well conceived. TY Kate xx|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|Love the images and thought in this write.|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|A beautiful, imaginative write....thanks for sharing
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I love the imagery here, you must definitely dream in colors, although you have some wild dreams buddy...I like the title for this one, it seems to fit quite naturally...Ed & Rufuz|
|Reviewed by Eddie Thompson
|i always wonder that when i see eos dancing in the sun....great poem.|
|Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)
|You are on the edge
Balanced on a filament
Between darkness and light
Hell and heaven
Between two worlds
The razor sharp strand
Seemingly seeks to split your soul"
Excellent imagery! And how many of us live this.... Great write, Regis....
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Don't we!!! So many times, I have awakened knowing it was, somehow, more than just a dream. Very nice, as always, when I visit your den, Regis.
|Reviewed by Joshua Miller (Reader)
|Life, to me, is a dream!|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Exquisite expression REgis! Thank you for sharing. Love the art too...
|Reviewed by Michelle Close Mills
|I wonder if practically everything in my life is just a dream! ha ha!Sometimes I sure wish some of it was! :-) This is a beautiful, building piece that ends with a flourish...blessings and hugs to you Regis...Michelle|
|Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
|Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed this, Regis!|
|Reviewed by A PAX
|I have a think for twlight moments of the mind...I like that dream state.......dawn.......annoys me, since I wake so early.......
nice presentation :)
|Reviewed by jude forese
|it is more than a dream, it is an awakening ... intensely beautiful and thought inspiring ...|
|Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
|For me yes it would be a dream although some of them I have trouble with.|
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Oh, my, Regis... this builds to a vivid and moving crescendo! "balanced on a filament" is pure poetry, imaginative and accessible to the open mind... a marvelous piece that shimmers! katy xox.|
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Powerful poem and pic.|
|Reviewed by Pamela Kimmell
|Quite beautifully written....fugue describes the mystery perfectly.|
|Reviewed by Nordette Adams
|Good title and elegant write.|
|Reviewed by Janet Parker
|Beautiful write. Ancient and mysterious.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|A marvelous write, Regis; and that wonderful artwork fits this so well.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|A wonderful imagery and great writing of inspirations. Thank you!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|A beautiful, image filled, work. Enjoyed.|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
your imagery just shines--and so does this write
i particularly love
"...you are on the edge
balanced on a filament
between darkness and light
hell and heaven...." <--------magnificence!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|Brillant..All though I thought it was gunna be about Bach's tacata..|