|Reviewed by Teresa Walker
|Sunset bathed in scarlet hues...beautiful Regis! I like word play!
|Reviewed by lois christensen
|I'll take the yellow fields of canola.
|Reviewed by Kenny Moon
|Unashamedly romantic, Regis. Your aura must be all the colors of the rainbow.
Just downloaded Ken Russell's adaptation of D.H. Lawrence's novel 'The Rainbow' and it's looking good!
|Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
|How lovely relating a love for someone with all the colours of the rainbow. Rainbows always seem to bring such joy into the hearts of people. Thanks for reading my poem|
|Reviewed by Morgan McFinn
Very sweet. I enjoy your poems. Mostly because they are expressions of joy.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|A LOVE FOR 'ALL' SEASONS...CERTAINLY, A 'GIFT' RARE AND PRECIOUS...LIKE A RAINBOW! THANKS FOR SHARING, REGIS...ENJOYED MUCH. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
|splendid write, regis!
peace & blessings,
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Beautiful colors of love Regis. You tie them together in rainbow fashion.
|Reviewed by baz busbe
|I love that poem regis, i also love rainbows. god bless. Baz|
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|what an amazing piece that's love in it's fullest
A rainbow fill with the colors of true love!
Let my gift be
A rainbow of love
Stunning love poem regis..hugsss :)
|Reviewed by Z McClure
|a very visual feast for the eyes...very warm poem!
Enjoyed lots Regis!
|Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr.
|"And sunsets bathed in scarlet hues". This is beautiful Reg, my friend.
|Reviewed by Janice Springs Hamilton
|Absolutely beautiful! You have expressed your love in a keleidescope of heartfelt colorful hues... I love it! Blessings, Janice|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|excellent write regis
most enjoyable reading
Peace be with you
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Beautiful poem and wonderful images..I really like the concept........M|
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Regis you are such a romantic! Color suits you. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|A lovely creation Regis.. very nicely crafted.. Myrna|
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Beautifully painted, Regis. Thank you for sharing your gift. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|What an enchanting bouquet for the one you love, Regis!!! Nicely done..
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Beautiful Regis...being from the so called "Rainbow Nation Country" SOUTH AFRICA...this is what love should be all about...colorful and filled with fun :)!!
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Color my world beautiful...Reg your poem is perfect just as is~
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|a kaleidoscope of emotion expressed with succinct imagery. I would not change a thing. The only thing I question is making something so seemingly intimate public... just me, I guess, but PDAs turn me off.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Dearest Regis, I just Love the colors
of Your Heart...and would Never change
how You express it....so, praying that
you will forever keep crayolas on hand!!!
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|An absolutely lovely poem; can't imagine why anyone would find any fault with it??? All of your work is consistently good, Regis. Correction: I would have to say that it is excellent. Enjoyable read.
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I don't read poetry to pick it apart like some folks...hey, Reg, I liked it...always love what you love and write about with love...Ed|
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|cosmic and spiritual unity Regis -- you have internalized this work as your expression reveals -- sounds like a heart smitten to me my dear friend -- it is good to see you share your poetic talents with us again -- I bid you joy, love and peace -- Jon Michael|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The kaleidoscope effect, exactly. Strange that you would write a love poem at Halloween?
Unless you are in love…?
|Reviewed by Richard King
|Well, I for one, like your work Regis. I'm kinda nervous about posting anything from here on out though. Hope you're good friends with Lena, cause she certainly shredded your poem.
I’ve always considered you to be one of the more accomplished poets here on the Den. I want to continue to grow and learn, but I'm afraid my skin is too thin to stand up to that kind of a scathing review.
Keep up the good work, you can't please everyone.
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Now THIS is the world we all want to have a share in, Regis! Such a place of vivid harmony and hue would cause us all to smile and feel at peace. :)) The perfect gift and you the perfect giver. May you always share such brilliant and perfect days such as this together. xx|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|YOu are travelling with colours to the heart, very descriptive, Blessings! Jasmin Horst|
|Reviewed by Steve Ralph
|I really enjoyed that.
Thanks For Sharing.
|Reviewed by Micki Peluso
I loved this--a little different from your usualy prose--more free style and exquisitely expressed.
All the best,
|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|The idea of the poem is great and the poem is good but I think you can make it even better with some editing.
I would start the poem with "Wild lavender violets" and end it with "And sunsets bathed in scarlet hues". The lines before the big stanza and after it don't do anything for the poem. They just seem to take up space. You can have those lines in the description or in a different font before the poem. Something like... My love. Let my gift be a rainbow of love.
I am not a fan of the line "Depending on mood or weather". It is not poetic really. And it sounds weak compared to your last line "And sunsets bathed in scarlet hues". “Blue eyes”, “Sometimes green”, and “Emerald like yours” don’t stand out either.
"And sunsets bathed in scarlet hues" is actually my most favorite line in the poem and I think it is the best one. I think all your lines in the poem should top this one. That would make the poem unforgettable and that much more beautiful.
Towards the end of your poem you write… "Orange tiger lilies bowing in the breeze" and "Sunsets bathed in scarlet hues". In these two lines you mention an object/thing (orange tiger lilies, sunsets) and attach an action verb after it (bowing, bathed). Why aren't you doing the same thing with the other lines in the poem? If you do that with the other lines in the poem, the poem will become that much better. It will instantly connect with the heart in a way it doesn’t right now. And the flow will be smoother too as it is not 100% smooth right now. I am not saying every line must have an action verb but if you are including an object/thing in your poem (like wild lavender violets, indigo skies, yellow fields of canola, etc.) then have it do something… like what you did with the sunsets and the orange tiger lilies. Hope you understand what I am trying to say here.
Well, I hope I have been of some help to you Regis. Let me know your thoughts on what I’ve shared with you regarding this poem.
Thanks for sharing and please keep on writing!!!!!
Forever your fan,
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|thisss is sooo niicccceee... :)|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
this is beautiful.
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|A beautiful poem...love the picture too.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|A most touching gift; one that should be cherished and nurtured. Lovely, Reg.
|Reviewed by Susan Smith
|This needs to be lyrics in a song!
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|A gift to be cherished. I'm glad you didn't choose goldenrod, Regis. Achoo! Your rainbow is filled with the loveliest colors.
The picture is the perfect backdrop. I like the mischievous side in your bio picture, too.
|Reviewed by Olita Williams
|wonderful and very encouraging. Just what I needed to lift my spirits.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Beautiful write, Beautiful Lady, Beautiful Love. You nailed it with this exotic gem, Regis.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|your verses are just like romantic arrows penetrating the heart. Well done dear Regis.|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Disarmingly beautiful and romantic poem, Regis!
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|A perfect delight both poem and pic Regis! You write best about love !;-)
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Very, very nicely written, Regis. Great poem.|
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|This is absolutely beautiful poetry Laura
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|No need to look for the pot of gold at the end of your rainbow - I saw it nestled in the yellow fields of canola. Enchanting Regis.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|wonderful spectrum of a special emotion ...|