|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Haunting write... I could feel it well done!!|
|Reviewed by jithesh
|somehow i am a person who like death becos it is one thing we are afraid of but still cant escape...|
|Reviewed by Nancy D.
|Very sad write David, death a part of life, there is no set age on death. In your heart you have her love and you will move on. Your friends will help you do that.
|Reviewed by Katy Walsvik
|Writing from that 'dark' place can be agonizing.. yet it's a place of truth, as well.. this is succinct and very poignant.. you said it well.. I could "feel" it. katy.|
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|I've never been dead, so I won't know whether I will dream or not. Perhaps death is a long dream to another life that will never end?
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
|Reviewed by Erica Ivory
|You really can control your dreams... Just takes time.. This is so full of sadness.. I felt every word.|
|Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
|Agree.....quite a haunting write...well done....thanks, Dani|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)