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| Reviewed by Isabella Koldras |
5/17/2013 |
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The DNA Genome Project proved...we are not
as far away from the...Genetic ZOO...as we'd like
to think, but the ..."hand clasped on iron bars:
No escape!"....why worry yourself...where is a will
there is a way....Axilea.
The existence in a Gigantic Hologram produced
an inspiring, excellent poem!...proved...the objective
reality does not exist. The illusion appears real.
With warm regards Isabella.
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
5/17/2013 |
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~Axilea~
Illusions..soul stretched to vanishing point.
Excellent writing.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/17/2013 |
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Your poem reeks of hopelessness and despair from being tied to that which you cannot escape. Your point is well taken and understood.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
5/17/2013 |
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| VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by stan nassano |
5/17/2013 |
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In many ways we're not so far evolved from our animal ways in the real scope of things, which is it's ow self a paradox,and the few of us [poets] have the audacity to question the seemingly reality we exist/live in ...and so we pace on paper back and forth.
Axilea I think you are the Queen of thought provoking poems,nice work. |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
5/17/2013 |
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very well penned i enjoyed this
budd |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/16/2013 |
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| What a dream you painted here...it is nearly organized chaos orchestrated by the precise paintbrush you used. Absolutely fantastic, Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/16/2013 |
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| this reads like a unsettling dream, Captured in a zoo like existence. interesting and compelling! |
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| Reviewed by Keith Rowley |
5/16/2013 |
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| I like your work Axilea. This one paints clear images of a human mind seen from within by an alien entity. The only thing I don't like is the varying number of lines per verse, which I always find jarring and which distracts me from the vision of the poet. Of course, that's just personal taste! Still, few people of any sort create a vision so clear and so unique, forming a crystal window into the soul and imagination of the poet. I really like it! |
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