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  Salt Water Blues
by Douglas W Bentley
Wednesday, April 02, 2008
Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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I have the privilege to watch her walk along the beach at sunrise

She strolls down to the local grill

Close to where the fisherman have brought in their nightly catch.

It doesn’t get any better than this

The morning so still

 

The bustle of the dock

The darkest hour has stopped

Everyone with their keys to unlock

For what’s about to begin – the dreaded clock

 

Yes – tick tock tick tock

 

She strolls in - gets the same thing every morning.

Two eggs over easy.

Two strips of smoked bacon

Plain toast

Black coffee

 

For some reason, she sits to my right two stools

I wear my shades like I’m cool

 

As for me, I like my eggs scrambled

Sausage well done

Saturated buttered toast – strawberry jam

Grapefruit.

 

She reads every bit of the paper

I just read the sports, a few comics

Time slips away, it gets later

I’m in my flip flops and baggy shorts.

 

She goes down to the beach and dances in the water.

She might as well be naked in that wet t-shirt

All the old retired men swarm around her to flirt

She runs them off after about 10 minutes – nobody hurt.

 

She swims out into the gulf alone

Sometimes I think she’s half mermaid

The ocean her home

Or maybe even part manatee

I look for her through my telescope to see.

Where can she be?

 

Back on my deck, the morning quickly passes

Paradise doesn’t last

As time moves fast.

Shadows start to cast.

 

I don’t know where she goes

She disappears in the waves

But in the morning

There she’ll be

Walking along the beach.

 

If our eyes ever meet

I’m going to ask her where’s she’s been

But then, it’ll probably just start all over again.

Breakfast

Yesterday’s news

And salt water blues

 

DWB(c)2008

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Berva Dawn 1/24/2011
Just another day living on the beach
Well written with vivid pictures
And a touch of mystery.

SMILES BDB
Reviewed by Dark Knight 8/27/2009
this is a good poem and perhaps even the opening lines for a story-I was born and raised in Nova Scotia so the salt water blues( the ocean) seems to stay with Maritimers no matter where end up living-well done
Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo 6/27/2009
Wonderful use of prose within this piece ... she is vivid and alive with mystery ... an enjoyable read ~ Elizabeth
Reviewed by Lois Christensen 8/26/2008
How can salt water blues come when you are near the ocean. I guess they can if you cannot find her among the waves and don't know when you will see her again.
Reviewed by Amira van Kerk 4/5/2008
Great little story !
Amira
Reviewed by Michelle Mead 4/4/2008
God, this is well-written. Like a master class in poetry-I love the short lines, that it comes full circle, the descriptions that are so familiar, and the story you tell. This is a keeper.
Reviewed by John Leko 4/3/2008
...the pleasures we surround ourselves with...just enough for us...in wondering what may surround another...may still be...just that...enough for us.
...very well penned thoughts...these sands of time...you give us Douglas.
John
Reviewed by richard cederberg 4/3/2008
Satisfying, and yet unrequited. You and me are in the same fields of lovely visions of late Douglas. Superbly felt and articulated.
Richard
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 4/2/2008
Well said tale and could see you sitting there watching adoringly over breakfast on the beach.....

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 4/2/2008
Any beach is wonderful place to live and die...:) ed
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/2/2008
A magical poem to read Douglas! Love it all;-) Funny I just posted dreams of summer;-)...ET
Reviewed by Carla Cherry 4/2/2008
Your poem is wonderful: imagery, narration, etc. I can visualize the speaker as he watches his secret crush play in the water. Thanks for sharing!
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