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  While God Smiles
by George Carroll
Thursday, August 23, 2012
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Exploration of the unknown


The earth is a ball in this universe of ours

We are still trying to figure out who built it

As we gaze into the stars and ponder yonder

Looking for that piece of the puzzel while God smiles.

 

The best minds are working day and night

To prove how we came into existence

Or if there is other life out there that can help.

We send rovers to mars to explore the unknown.

 

And if we should find water or some forms of life

Hurray,  a part of the secret that life did exist or could

So we hurry with new experiments

And God still smiles at our weak attempts.

 

 

 

 

 




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Reviewed by Jon Willey
George, this is the view all should harbor, but too few have reached the plateau of belief to see it - I bid you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
Reviewed by Mary Tilley
Actually, I think God is laughing too! He thinks we are hilarious...and well...we are! I believe he created all of the enigma out there so that we could explore, if you will, the vast place we call the universe! I also believe he's in control of what we will find out and what he will keep hidden. Great poem George! Thank you again, for your widsom! :-)
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
As long as God is smiling..
he can't be angry...*George*
the wise owl....

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by T Jett (Reader)
"And God still smiles at our weak attempts"
Wonderful poem and true George...
Reviewed by Laura Fall
An excellent write so deep and meanigful Laura
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Hi George, I liked your poem. I firmly believe God created a perfect universe. It was man who spoilt it all. Just read history books (not only of the USA) and you will know.
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
We are weak in our attempts. But we must attempt them after all. For without going forward, we are sliding backward into old habits and old troubles that we should have left behind when we left the earth for the moon.

Ron
Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams

"so we hurray with new experiments". I like that hurray/hurry it seems to me. Like a father watching his small child's curious attempts to understand it's surroundings...nice. Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
It is all part of the great mystery George
of which none of us will know until we all
become a part of the Universe after the
end of our earthly existence :)

Lovely thoughts of man

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Weak attempts or not, His is not a perfect creation, George.
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